Nice. I liked that a lot. Very emotional, good child-o-vision, I do like the flashbacks at random and the wait-a-minute factor. Very well done, nicely descriptive and interesting.

Sand3

Dilly! ! i wuvs my diwwy!*sob* why'd he have to change back into a girl? *sob* you know, 'tis wierd. i once had a "paper dream." i got this book from the library and the paper figures in it came alive! i like had that dream twice, dude! the second time i remember more vividly cause it was more recently. but both times i woke about ready to bolt to the door but was afraid to cause the paper people were coming...*shudder* there was this family, a mom, dad, brother, sister. the girl got a book about paper dolls...i don't remember the details, but everyone died, mother last, in which i vividly remember her saying something like "fangs on me" or whatever cause her family all died. then these HUGE fangs drop outta the sky and onto the mother...ugh, might seem funny, but for some reason it creeped me out...anyway, i'm writing a long review, wow, never so long! i still say Dilandau-sama rules...*drool* sqeezes chibi-dil _

This was an unbearably intense, harrowingly-described, FANTASTIC story! The ambience is alive and telling it through Celena's childish eyes makes it all the more creepy (in the best way possible). Folken's cute...the claw was him...but you know that dialogue in which Cele reveals that she's hiding...was that him as well? Folken, I mean? It IS that dear man...I hope! May I put this one up? It's got sufficient Folken-ness to it, besides, I don't give a fig because this is simply one of the most haunting stories I've read. Mail me about it, eh? And keep writing these amazing Celena, or Folken, or Dil one-shots...!