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Inu's Hanyo 2007-08-08 ch 1,	abusewow you are a great writer.. i love the story cant wait for more
AliLamba 2005-12-20 ch 1,	abuseOH VIT-KINS! Squee! is what I have to say to this! And DROOL. much much drool. So good. So I only read this first because I knew what IY was, compared to all the other animes which I have left myself out of the loop on ^^; Will read them anyway though! I'm back! Where are you? There must be contact.
Ambrosia ^_~ 2005-12-12 ch 1, anon.	abusegood gracious that was so desperately dramatic, but mostly it was really lovely and sweet. It's nice to see someone approach inuyasha from a different angle, kinda scary how much more... i don't know, real it made eevrything seem. There was something that bugged me reading your story, but I have no clue what it was... your story just left me witha gut-wrenching "aww..." that erased any constructive criticism there was to offer from my mind completely... Except natalie imbruglia. Okay, so that's not constructive - but natalie imbruglia, really? Ugh. She was on NEIGHBOURS for crying out loud..! She was in that stupid movie with Rowan Atkinson! She endorses MAKE UP..! Even if by some miracle her wishy-washy-waif lyrics managed to touch you somewhat, how on EARTH can anyone take her seriously?! But more importantly, aww... Your story got me, right there. I usually don't review bcoz I don't really know enough InuYasha to you know, be able to judge that well I suppose... but, aww. bravo
Stefanie2 2005-10-24 ch 1,	abuseIn character, well written, completely ignoring the 'fanon' of youkai mating and all that (which gives you triple points) and just overall beautiful. I love this story and am making sure it goes to a few friends who, like me, are always desperately seeking something beautiful and canon.
Kaichou 2005-07-05 ch 1,	abuseIt might be not right for me to critique this, seeing as lemons aren't my region of writing nor reading, but I love your work - I had to read it! I could barely tell it was a lemon, seeing how most of it was focused on the emotional side of things, and it was beautifully written!
NoWireHangers 2005-04-05 ch 1,	abuseLovely job keeping the characters 'in character'. Most of these IY scenarios are wildly ooc, but this one is nicely realistic and understandable. The character reactions are actually unforced and believable. I hope you decide to do more IY in the future, I will be checking back in case you do!
Crutches the magic hippie 2005-02-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseTHAT WAS SO GOOD! I LOVED IT! It really captured the pain and sadness in thier hearts as the uncertainy of the situation unfolded. I hope you do write more! It is a very moving fic ^_^
kawaii_auri 2005-02-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseWOW!! this fic was amazing!! i've always thought Inuyasha as the type of guy whose "tough on the outside, and shy and vulnerable on the inside". in this fic i think u got him right where he should be portrayed through fanfics. good job. -kawaii_auri p.s- is there a continuation?
FyodorD 2005-01-30 ch 1,	abuseSo heart-wrenching and beautiful. I didn't think it was all that OOC. I've always felt that Inuyasha was a bit love-starved myself. I liked the way you captured the hesitation of the "first time". Inu wasn't a sex god or anything - just a wounded soul looking for someone to care. I am glad that Kikyo wasn't watching from the sidelines. By the way, did you see the "kiss" in the 2nd Inuyasha movie? Sigh.
Hyperactive Waterworks 2005-01-15 ch 1,	abusewow...heavy
thelionqueen 2004-11-29 ch 1,	abuseAh-HA!! Finally! Now that was an elegant and truly realistic portrayal, not just of Inu-Yasha, but what their first 'joining' would really be like. A highly enjoyable fic. clicks on Favorite Stories list :D
ixchen 2004-10-20 ch 1,	abusei loved it.. very good
Clio de Carabas 2004-10-13 ch 1,	abuseVery nicely done! I totally agree with your take on InuYasha, very in character in my opinion. The encounter was very sweet and honest and I LOVE IT! Thank you for a wonderful one-shot.
Wheezambu 2004-10-05 ch 1,	abuseI thought this was very moving and beautiful, so sweet, a little sad, but ah! What a gorgeous one shot.
Whitehair-Dogears and King ... 2004-10-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseWhDe: I rarely review for stories anymore, your story was so good. I LOVED YOUR STORY! It made me cry. sniffles Very good. You should write more like it. KoH:hey i read the thinngy and that shinnzzle is the kool shitz uhhm mind that im tired ok wel uhm yay ewiewiewiewiwwqiqwiqiwiqi

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