 5redroses 2008-05-01 . chapter 1Aww, Sirius! That's so sweet! I liked the thing about Remus never crying before, that seemed very in character. Also, I know it's odd but the line: "Sirius couldn't sleep. It wasn't because James was snoring or Peter's nose was whistling," stuck me particularly, the last bit is such a good description of what people sound like when they sleep! |
 KeiraAchiOkanabe 2007-06-15 . chapter 1Hm...interesting, I suppose, lol. |
 Liveforthemoments 2006-10-07 . chapter 1I really love this, the descriptions of the charaters are so believable... I can't say I would mind if this developed into slash... :D... Well done! Ciao |
 Forsaken Angel 13 2005-11-22 . chapter 1Good. I really like it, but I hope it isn't becomming slash. Oh well. Update soon |
 Goddess of Idun 2005-08-28 . chapter 1good story! |
 Alone Dreaming 2005-07-18 . chapter 1 I must admitt, I am terribly bad about reviewing but I know I've read this a few times and I was SURE I had reviewed. I must have been wrong though- many apologies.
This was excellent. A perfect display of both characters. Sirius is (from what we understand) reckless, and haughty but he has a big heart, specially for his friends. I could see him sitting there comforting Remus...
Keep writing! I enjoyed this very much!
-Alone Dreaming |
 RavenNat 2004-10-11 . chapter 1Aww! Excellent take on the post-prank days. I especially loved the ending. I'd write more, but it's way past the time that I meant to go to bed, so I'll say bravo and goodnight :) |
 Wolfbaneshybrid 2004-09-30 . chapter 1That was wonderful. It looked like that took a lot of time and effort to write, and it really shows. Poor Remus, I feel so sorry for him. Hope you write more R/S in the future! |