This sounds like a great story! I love that film, loking forward to more! :)

that's really cute.

-Die Emo

cute!

AWESOME!

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This sucks!

That was sweet...the title was a bit iffy, but I liked that it was told in a very Jean-Pierre Jeunet fashion. I think the chapter should have been longer, though, because the whole feel of the film 'Amelie' isn't rushed, while this chapter, however, is.

Hey, Eya!

This chapter is very sweet, and your story, very promising! It's exactly like Amélie Poulain. But, hey, why aren't you writing more? Do you still plan on writing more chapters? I hope so!

Cheers, Aline.

This seemed pretty good, I think it will develop into a great story.

The situation was very Amelie Poulin. I like it and I think you just inspired me to write a poem about Amelie in French.

Kiss Morgaine

This is very cute and adorable! Kudos to you for being the first person for an Amelie story.

this story is fantasic and one of the best i have read on this website. can't wait for the next chapter :)

I think in tone, this is very much like the movie. Certainly the first few minutes anyway, with the voice-over. Continue!

This sounds great, I love the idea of what happened earlier in their lives? fic. Please, Please, Continue!

just keep on writing... you have a potential! :)

I love the movie Amelia, but this isn't the most exciting and has little discription. I would suggest that you add more detail, its such a plainly written story.