Great story! I love it so far and hope you add more.

e! please keep writing! please...

Wow thats really cool! one of the best storys yet!

that's awesome!

The descriptions of Shadow's pain (though morbid) were very well done. I think I'll go read some of your other fics. :D

~liz

I absolutely LOVED THIS! Please write another angst/torture fanfic!

I truly did enjoy this story. It capture a moment that seems to be part of Shadow's life. I applaud thee.

God, that was tense! I was holding my breath at the end! No, seriously, it was that well written *gives Shadow a donut*

that was good ^.^ update soon if ur gunna continue

I liked it a lot! Oh man! I could just feel all the pressure that Shadow was going through. I liked all the desription and I wish you would write more!

Thank you for the advvice...I understand what you meant...I was just very tired.. -__- Well, great story. I loved evry word put into this chapter ^__^

Golbez: That was so cool
Sally: O.o
Dark: o.O
Mascara: huh? what i was drinking coffee!