Kirin's side of the story is filled with a bit more emotion and a lot of sadness, but it sure is interesting seeing his view of things. Pieces together some of the 'missing' scenes that Ari didn't experience.

Wowzer! I wuv yur stories! can't wait until Koiji comes out. =-)

A lovely ending to an excellent story! Can't wait for the next one!

I still can't get over Kirin's comment in chapter five.
"Beaked females ar wonderful lovers. Miza plays the most amazing jade flute. Exquisite."
Such filthy innuendo! I had to cover my mouth in order not to wake my parents! That was hilarious!

Seeing the rest of the "Tengu" story from Kirin's perspective makes the whole affair that much richer, deeper... Beautiful!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Awesome chapter! It really made my day to see the alert for this in my inbox! :)

Yay, now we've caught up to the "Tengu" story's timeline! It's great to read that tale again from an entirely different persepctive. Can't wait for the next chapter!

VERY nice sequel/prequel to Tengu. I wonder, what will happen in the near future?

YAY! I'm so glad for an update. Very good. It's interesting to learn more about the characters!

Beautiful, as always! I quite enjoy Kirin! And I'm finally getting to know which Tengu Clan Gargoyle is which! lol. It's interesting to see how things were before Ariana came along, and I'm so glad to know that Kirin and Ari got together. Makes it so much better.

The think I'd like to know, is how there's so much empty wilderness in Japan, where there's so many people in so little space...

I LOVE your stories and your artwork so much! I hate having to wait so long for an update!

Great new chapter! I loved it! I can't wait to read the next. i was wondering, how do you pick the names? I love them! When you write them they feel so right. What's your secret?

~ Nicky Dee

I like it. I was waiting for you to write another story with Kirin in it. He's one of my favorite characters. Great story!

That was interesting, in that Goro would let them do that, and even more that he would offer. But, I guess with Gargoyles there is no marriage thing, so... yeah. Nice, I liked the interaction. It was good.

Oh...didn't really think any man (or gargoyle) would do that. Allow his wife to be with another man. Pretty deep stuff.