sweet and fun

Aww the end was real cute

I really enjoyed your story. I felt that joey was really in character, it's totally something he would do. I felt that Kaiba was a little out of character. I always felt that even if he had no experience with love/lust and such that he would have more common sense in going about courting someone, even if that person is Joey.

*laughs* That was awesome! Kaiba you self absorbed bastard! Great work!

hi, i just read your fic today, and i like it. funny, to read how kaiba send pink stuff and flower to jou. i like all the parts when kaiba conceite himself _. u doing so great in describing it. good job. i also will start to make my first fic, but in my livejournal. hope u can read it too. thank u 4 ur good fic.

super

Sneezing in the middle of sex. Good move Kaiba xD Still, awesome one shot. I love Kaiba's point of view, it's so easy to make fun of him that way.

Hm...this was superb.

I really liked how persistant Kaiba was in his persutes for Joey.I thought it was really good how you never allowed Joey to cave until he really got what he wanted, causing Kaiba to realize things himself that started as a challenge, but ended in love.

People often rush them because their chemistry is so passionate, but you were able to keep the passion burning without being rushed about it.

It was absolutely adorable and very well written.

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sweet story... (sighs). DO MORE!

that was gr8! i rlly enjoyed reading it, it really pulled me into the story. also, i like how you did it from seto's point of view.

Sweet! Thing is I can actually picture the whole story in my mind..that's like SO disgustingly cute. Great job :D

How is it that I've never read this before? What kind of puppyshipper am I?

Brilliant. I would give you constructive criticism...but I can't. I'm too impressed.

And laughing way too hard. O.o

-iloveatem

SO CUTE. _

Very believable, good grammar and spelling.

Love is being able to share a cold!

Aw! That was so sweet! Please excuse me as I go squee in a corner over the fluffiness of it all. Good job on this fic.