I am sorely dissapointed with this turn of events. Dominic? I mean what are you thinking?

and?

OMG this is so good!i cannot help but be hyper now! (well that and i have had WAY too many suckers...they were really good!) so now i have to be quiet during my class... XD neway LOVE your story and will be patiently (but exitedly) waiting for the next chapter!

Nice one! Keep on updating... I will keep on waiting. _

Interesting, I wonder if Meryl will be injected with the serum, forcing Knives to change his entire attitude. Do update soon.

GAH!

More frequent please. AND YOU USED MY FAVORITE GUY'S NAME! T.T It's now tainted by the likes of him.

oh!

girl you better hurry writing the continuation, I can't stand the suspense!

Lovin this. Its hard to pull off the correct persona when dealing with knives and so far, I think this story in successful. I love Meryl/Knives fics just because I like reading different perspectives on knives.

Hurry up and continue. I'm so dying to read what else will unfold.

So, Vash & Knives have a little brother... how sweet! But he doesn't seem to have much better a view of humans than Knives! What a nice cliffie in the middle of the chapter, did Knives actually kill Gale or did he just force info from her?

Thanks!

mouse

I'm drawing a blank on who this guy is but maybe that's what you want. I'm glad you updated and am really looking forward to the next chapter!

What a positively entrancing story! I've just sat down and read the entire thing and was not in the least bit disappointed. Great choice of plot and excellant characterization. I've certainly enjoyed the insight into Knives. I do hope you keep up the great work!

OMG this story is AWSOME i have totaly fallen in love with it!POOR meryl! she was so close to the twins and so close to loosing the mystery guy!

So, my initial reaction to reading this chapter was, as follows; ZOMG! (never mind I have no real idea what ‘zomg’ means) then OMFG! Then it was OMFG PLOT! I, of course, shouted this as I jumped from my computer seat, and got many angry words from my mother, who was trying to watch desperate housewives.

Yeah… coherent plot, it makes me happy…

Yes, after getting all of the big details (albeit at a slower rate than a dead or functionally retarded chipmunk) I started to think ‘who the foo is this dude?’ yeah, you made me think foo. So now you’ve got me backtracking, and I can’t find mention of this guy, and I’m so utterly in awe at your mysteriousness that I BOW DOWN in confusion.

So, where exactly is the review for this, you ask? I dunno, I think I lost it with the foo man.

O.o

You’ve ruined my ability to make coherent sentences with your plot.

Hurts brain of mine, it does, yup yup.

(dear god I am sleep deprived, forgive me)

Ah well, supports and stuffs to you. : )

- Rei Azayahi

Who the man?

O_o this story keeps getting better and better!