The story sounds great so far. I really like the relationship ones. Will you finish this and have them rescued by Voyager?

This is a GREAT story. From the get go you snare the reader with a plot twist that comes barreling you over and you keep it going while keeping the characters as close to their canon persona's as possible. I for one can not wait to read the rest of this gem.

It's going along great. I'd never thought of Janeway selling her body, but I supose it's entirely posible, especially in an a/u like this. (btw, sorry if this posts twice)

Looking forward to more.

Well-written angst. I like it.

Nice characterization of Paris' reaction to the discovery, too.

SnoopMary

Very well written story. Although I would like more details in the chapters, making it more a novel than a short story. Not that I don't like it the way it is ... I just think, that this is a very interesting plot and there a lots of spaces to fill out to make the story and characters more complex and alive.

Keep on writing ... I want to read many, many more chapters.

This is a very good story. I really enjoy it, infact this is the first story that I've reviewed eventhough I've read alot. So sorry if I'm not doing a good job. But I really hope that you will finish it soon. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen.

Well, things just keep getting worse and worse, don't they? Good stuff. I love the end line of part four about Paris' piloting skills.

A great story! (what i was able to read of it) Wow! Angsty and disturbing. I like how Owen Paris says Tom will either end up a pilot or dead by age fifteen - cute!

I must confess, I am highly curious to see the rest of this story...

I love this story! You're taking it some really good places!

Ack, keep going! Soon! Fast! Excellent job with such heavy subject matter

*g* Good stuff (again). Great interactions between chars, especially Janeway and Chakotay.

Brilliant! :-)

Whoo boy, a bit of heavy reading...it really is good though. I hope there's more comming soon.

Ooh, write more! This is interesting! I've always thought that there's something more to Janeway and Tom's relationship, and you've made a really good plot around that. Well done (and write more!)