Very good. Slightly creepy, and it made Ryou-kun seem insane...I loved it!

very...interesting...

That was weird, but very good. You don't see much Ryou torture where losing everything comes to this reaction. I liked the twist at the end, where even though he had the chance to have evrything again he destroted it himself. That was excellent twisting.

Ryou's so adorable! I think you're rubbing off on me. Love the story!

wow, this is amazing...please update soon!

can I kill Bakura. Please pretty please. How could he take so much from Ryou and then just leave him. Quite depressing, I'll give you that. Hope a new chapter comes soon. Please save Ryou!

UWEH~! I -love- this! So dark, so angsty, pretty, pretty, pretty...outstanding work. Brilliant!

That was... really.. odd. But hey it was fun to read and helpt me kill time. It'd be fun if you wrote one last chapter where Ryou scares the hell out of Bakura by saying that Bakura is "His." lol. But meh you do as you want. I still liked that chapter. Ryou reminded me of a little kid. Anywho have a great day and thanks for writting this.

Uhm, yeah. Okay. That was CREEPY! *shivers* I now have a very disturbing image of that last paragraph. Yikes. But, hey, it was good! A good kind of creepy-- I read all of it! I guess it was one of those things where I wanted to see what was next even though I knew it was bad. hehe. But, anyway, yup, it was certainly different. Not that that's a bad thing.
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Yup-- I think creepy pretty much sums up this short little story. I really can't think of another word to describe it. But, hey, creepy stories are interesting stories! Bring on the creepiness! o_0 Yeah, you're not the only weird one in these here parts!
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Anyhoo, I'm glad you posted the creepy fic! 'Tis good! Yup-- now I have that annoying urge to go around and say "mine!" This review-- MINE! Mwhah! Okay, but, seriously, good, creepy story. And I think you now get the point of this review so I'll be signing out now! ^_^
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Mine! Mine! Mine! :P LOL! ^_~

koolios! was that a one shot? ...lol. good fic!

That was very peculiar, and different, but in a good way of course. ^_^ Twistedly interesting. Ironic in a way. Keep up the good work. Hope to see u around. ^_~

How bittersweet! I loved it! It was kind of... twisted, yes. But then again, I like twisted stuff, so yeah... anywho, amazing job! This was so unique! NOt like anything I've read, at leas nothing comes to mind. The ending was like the best part, it totally made the whole fic. *sniff* Mine... what a great word... anywho, amazing, brilliant, perfect job! I loved it!
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OMG, that was so weird. I was all... what the heckness? wat's up with Ryou? Is he NUTS?! obviously. But the ending was sad. (but lol, Bakura left because Ryou was driving HIM crazy!) Good job though...

*not doing homework* Whoa! I really liked this one! Reminds me of Edgar Allan Poe's: The Raven. Where the Raven could only say Nevermore and that word was nearly haunting the man who had lost Lenore. *Grins* Love the angst in this! Great job!