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thrnbrooke
2006-05-14 . chapter 2
Aw! I'm glad Draco got his guy! Harry came around and got out of an abusive relationship and I hope that Draco got revenge!
sherrynell
2004-12-29 . chapter 2
Hi I would like to congratulate 4 ur wonderful piece. I'm kinda excited to know what will happen so pleace update it soo...
PostPostPost!
2004-10-30 . chapter 2
Post! i wanna know what happens to ron! and what goes on between draco and harry! =]
Sandalino Silvio Leif
2004-10-08 . chapter 2
I'm reviewing.

Post the next chapter?

-Leif
LG
2004-10-02 . chapter 2
I remember! I remember! I LOVED this fic. I missed it! Oh. Next chapter!
California smells funny
2004-10-02 . chapter 2
Aw! This is so, so cute. The idea of Harry and Ron is a little aagh, but it's over now :-)
Untitled-Soul
2004-10-01 . chapter 2
nice story so far! i can't wait until the next chapter comes out.
Lyonessheart
2004-09-30 . chapter 2
Hi,

okay I do have a suggestion for improvement. You should find a beta, to help you with your English, this story could be really great if it weren't for small errors in spelling and grammar. You also tend to write in runon sentences which is exhausting for th reader. I hope you aren't mad now. If you want, I could do this for you, I have written several stories that you can use as a reference.

Greetings Lyoness
ArtysSexKitten
2004-09-30 . chapter 2
As much as I hate it when Ron is a bad guy, this story is so cute! You have to update! I'll be waiting for it!
Smirking Menace
2004-09-30 . chapter 2
Roh! Stupid weasel! Long Live to Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy couple! Continu!
Stormie Night
2004-09-30 . chapter 2
poor harry weasley should be beat with a stick. cant wait to see what draco does.
DEDMUN
2004-09-30 . chapter 2
good one. glad you fixed that. much better. hope ron suffers much.
Kelebcarak
2004-09-30 . chapter 2
this is really good
update quickly
It'sLaurie
2004-09-30 . chapter 2
aw.
Maggie
2004-09-30 . chapter 2
More MOre More! (how do ya like it, how do ya like it. (Its a crap song but it fits the purpose...** im not gonna get it outta my head now))
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