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| Blue Fire Kitsune 2008-05-16 ch 2,  | abuseThis is a really good piece of work. The plot is balanced and the personality of Mewtwo is still in character even with Andrea. The first chapter sits up the problem before hand without giving to much details so the reader has to guess what would happen next. I am very happy that I found this story out og some fics that seem to have less guality work in their structer. I hope you continue this exllent piece of work that you work to hard to achieve and keep the good work up please. |
| aztec luv 2005-11-26 ch 1, | abuseLike it so far and I have only one thing to say... THANK YOU! You finally made my dream come true! You see, my name is Andrea and I always wanted to be the have my name as the main female charactyer in a Mewtwo story but I will be mad if you kill her off so please update soon! |
| SHADOW RAVEN 2005-06-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseHee, I think this will be very good when its finished! |
| Random Reader 2004-10-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseGreetings from this wandering Random Reader! You have a very well done story right here! This wandering one loves it already! Hmm...So Mewtwo seems to be losing his mind. This unworthy one hopes that he can get control over his mind again before Andrea or anyone else is hurt or killed. But this wandering guesses that it was bound to happen seeing as Mewtwo has such a huge mind. Oh well. Andrea seems to be a sweet young girl who cares for people. This wandering one is touched with her devotion to him. Heh heh. Oh well (My most used phrase!). This unworthy one is impressed and can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the excellent work! Well, this wandering Random Reader will continue his journey through the lands that are this site. (Which has barred me from using their name!...Oh well...) Don't worry. The stories that this wandering one hears will always keep me company. I hope we meet again! Random Reader Wanderer of the Site That is Not to be Named |
| Psionicnemesis 2004-10-05 ch 2, | abuseexcellent story and nice usage of words there |
| Ri2 2004-10-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseOh dear, looks like Mewtwo's losing his mind. Well, it had to happen someday right? That's the downside of having such a big brain, psychosis may be more likely because of it. |
| Malchior The Draco 2004-10-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is pertty good. Keep up the good work. Peace out! MG |
| Ri2 2004-09-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseMewtwo the super hero. SWEET! I've always seen him as a hero too. Good luck with this story! |
| Morbane 2004-09-29 ch 1, | abuseInteresting and intriguing. I must also congratulate you on one of the few decent summaries I've seen in a while. You could do with a little less faith in the spell-checker, as I note from phrases like 'Covered from nearly head to toe in a brown clock' and 'the robbers staggered to their feat'. But still, a commendable commitment to professionalism. |