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Serena Hashiba 7/31/11 . chapter 1
What a weird story. I can hardly understand it with all the errors it has. I HATE IT AND SERENA IS THE REAL SAILOR MOON NOT YOU!
Heroine of the Valley 2/22/03 . chapter 3
Where are all the other scouts during this? True Heart sounds like an interesting scout. I can't help you much with this (because I've got a record of RW/SM crossies already!) however, have you tried taking a bath? It helps writers block!
Heroine of the Valley 2/22/03 . chapter 2
I love Ronin Warrior/Sailor Moon crossies! I made a shrine to these shows. However, this needs to be spellchecked. Do you have spell check on your document writing program? Like MS word? When Ryo called his attribute, you made him say "Vuture" instead of "virtue." I don't know if you were unsure of the spelling of Anubis' name or it was a typo but you spell the warlord's name of cruelty like this: "A-N-U-B-I-S" or if you want to use the YST version, his name is Shiten. (But I'm sticking with the RW version) Anyway, so far, so good.
Heroine of the Valley 2/22/03 . chapter 1
Wow! I wrote a Ronin Warrior/Sailor Moon crossover! The title is about the same. I'm in the process of re-doing it now that I've got Ronin Warriors on DVD.
Angelic Candy 7/25/01 . chapter 3
Hey PLEASE CONTINUE! THANKS!
Angelic Candy 7/25/01 . chapter 2
Hey! I really really REALLY like this! I LOVE the Ronin Warriors AND Sailor Moon, it fits in perfectly. But one question: why did Serena have crutches? And how is she so weak all of a sudden? E-mail me at: please and tell me! Hehe. I really like this! ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Lola of Lola and Dera 4/16/01 . chapter 3
I must admit. I tried. I tried to read your story. But, its kinda confusing. I understand where you wanna go with the story. So stick with that instead of branching off in other directions. It'll help people understand your story better. To conclude my little speech: You're story is good, but its not great. It has plenty of potential. I'd say keep it up, and slow down with your ideas. Thanx for listening.
samantha 3/25/01 . chapter 3
NEATO! I like it so far! But WHY do you make her do the DUMB speech! Please don't let her do that anymore!

Love ya,

Sam
Lana V Hashiba 3/25/01 . chapter 3
Great as always... Sorry, but Seth didnt want to sign in . (I hope I got my email address right)

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Snow Myth 3/20/01 . chapter 2
Cool, I would like to read more. I like this fic. I'm a little tired right now sooo, i'm not exactly going to leave a hyper review sorry. But i really did like this fic.
Anti Rainbows 2/14/01 . chapter 1
Cool! wonder who pulled her out of harms way guess i'll have to wait. Its sounds interestion so far. I don't think theres alot of rw/sm crossovers (though there are alot of gw/sm crossover.) But this one looks really really cool. Hope you come out with the next chap. soon.
kris 2/13/01 . chapter 1
cool

yea

love IT!
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