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| momozora 2008-06-28 ch 22, anon. | abusewa sugoi...i love this fic! please write a sequel?? pretty please? |
| sesskoi 2008-06-24 ch 22, anon. | abuseI LOVE YOU!! AND THIS STORY!! it's completly, utterly, fantasticly amazing. i honestly didn't know what to expect when i started this story but the more i read it the more i fell in love with it. you captured the very essence of my view of the characters, sesshomaru is especially hard to do just because many easily write him ooc. but your view was pure perfection. i loved how you made kagome strong headed and independent, but fragil when the plot line called for it, it was also perfect how you made her, in a sense, the bad guy for part of the story, instead of the constatly pure, innocent victim. And you didn't bash on kikyou!(personally i don't like her but it gets annoying when all everyone does is make her a b*) :) This was one of the few stories where half of me really wanted to finish it just so i could know the ending, but the other half was really really sad that it ended because it was soo damn good. I am embarrassed to admit that i lived as a hermit for the last week while i read it. i just couldn't get enough, so every free minute was spent reading your story. Thank you soo much for creating a story that left me breathless at the end, actually able to feel the raw emotions portrayed, and being able to picture their world through their eyes. You are an amazing, fantasic, gifted writer and i can't wait to read your next story! |
| Nasuki- formally Orihime Gi... 2008-06-23 ch 22, | abuseHeres a review for you, Little Authoress. E muja ouin cduno! Ed ec cu ysywehk, E tu drehg dryd oui cruimt syga yhudran uha, Yht E ihtancdyht fro oui kut dra pacd YI drehk. Fneha suna! Hycige- vunsymmo Uneresa Kenm |
| Nasuki- formally Orihime Gi... 2008-06-22 ch 17, | abuseI love reading this story! (Thats why its my fourth time reading it) But remembering all the time it took to read it the other times and the memories of the days make me want to cry, Gosh I feel corny. Your Writing is so thought inducing and memory keeping. You should really write your own novel or something. |
| Nasuki- formally Orihime Gi... 2008-06-21 ch 5, | abuseThis is like, my fourth time reading this story, its just so damned great! I R Jealous, I R Also Fan. |
| Lizz 2008-06-20 ch 19, anon. | abuseLol. I can't believe you just switched form third to first person half way through the story... thats just... kinda sad... (although I'm still enjoying it quite a bit) |
| Lizz 2008-06-19 ch 5, anon. | abuseI am enjoying the story, I really am, but I have one very small problem... You are continually mentioning how much she hates skirts and how uncomfortable she feels in them, but when you describe her in pants, you say that say that they drool over her tan legs. Does she use tanning beds or something? Well, I'm probably just being ocd, but that really seemed to kind of add a sort of 'unrealness' to an otherwise (taking into consideration the understandably fictional elements of the plot) believable plot. |
| MikoSlave 2008-06-04 ch 22, | abuseI really love this story! After reading it I was so moved! It's defiantly one of the best stories I've read. The ending was really nice too! |
| PhoenixHeartSong 2008-05-13 ch 14, | abuseHey! I've read this story hundreds of times before, but I still love it! You probabaly don't remember me, my name's Amanda, we used to chat on my old email. Anyways, I'm dying for someone to draw a picture of Sesshomaru spinning Kagome like that at the end. Do you think anyone has? |
| Kaiyou-Kitsune 2008-04-08 ch 22, | abuseOmg.I love you!That was so amazing and beautiful and wow.*sob*I really wanted to strangle you at times but wow.I love this story!*hugs*Im just gonna reread this chapter over a few more times and my other favorite parts for awhile.*sob*Happiness! |
| KittyCat 2008-03-27 ch 7, anon. | abusethis is THE BEST fan fic I have read so far. in fact, I wouldn't even call it a fan fic, I find it more of a novel. if it weren't for the fact that you don't own inuyasha or FF8 (I think thats the right one, I'm no good with roman numerals), then I'd encourage you to publish it. the only downside of this story is the fact that it's on a computer, which makes it harder to read, because of the light. even so, I enjoyed reading this. now ima have a look at your other stoies ;P |
| Meixing 2008-03-24 ch 22, anon. | abuseI LOVE YOUR STORY! IM GLAD I SAW IT WHILE SEARCHING FOR OTHER STORIES. THIS IS BY FAR ONE OF THE BEST IVE READ =) |
| Gnos fo Ytinrete 2008-03-02 ch 22, | abuseWoah. Good story. I can really see the FMA influence. What did that thing that he say to her that brought Kagome back mean? "You are human"? or something? Maybe it's "Humans need their sleep and you are human...aren’t you?" ?? Please answer. Ooh. So sweet. If Seshoumaru ever actually was this sweet all his fangirls would die happily of a heartattack. lol. Mm. I didn't actually like that last scene. Why didn't they keep their gunblades anways? Is the ambassador not allowed one and neither is a GF? It would symbolize them leaving behind their pasts if it did. But I don't see why they let all that training go to waste otherwise, if it weren't true. Mm. I really liked how you worked on their relationship, building it like that. Good job. I don't like the stories that jump right into the relationships. Keep up the good work. Cya 'round. Liliana |
| dyingtosurvive 2008-02-12 ch 11, | abuseWow...that is really all I could say about your story is wow. You did an amazing job crossing over events from the game and the characters from Inuyasha. Even though Sesshomaru seemed a little Ooc at times, it was still very enjoyable to read and I look forward to reading it many times in the future. Keep up the good work! dyingtosurvive |
| InuKat6688 2008-01-08 ch 22, | abuseOMG, that was like the longest and most best story that I've read in a good while!! Great job on the story! Keep up the good work!! ~InuKat6688~ |