Wowiee! You're a really great writer! I want to be just like you! ( I'm the same age as Griff... ) I really REALLY enjoy your story! I love you and your stories!

yay a pairing of psy and kay will you make another story after this?

Sorry I had to come back and review my other thought. Mac you are a son of a bitch for what you said with Allegra. It was your FAULT YOU PEACE OF SHIT! Um thought Allergra should've sad no you are with Kaori. That was SO RUDE OF MAC! Irish-Ninja you wrote a wonderful beautiful STORY. I like much. I hope my review doesn't make you mad if it does truly sorry about the comment of Mac.

I love the story a lot is is so bea- wait there was alot of killing this story was so AMAZING!

That was a great chapter. Psymon really whooped a**

OMG Theis is a great story after reading this chapter I hate Hiro with a passion. So I won't be picking him for a while. Or I should for he should stay away from the SSX gsng. hahahahaha. Well the story is fantastic. I think I'm going to act it out on my videogame. Sorry I'm a complete phsyco. LOVE IT!

Oh...well...it wasn't great...IT ROCKED FOR FUKKS SAKE! Coolio ending! Woo! You're a good writer, so, keep on writing!

i rthink u did the right thing. Rock On!

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Sincerly,

CoLLiSIOn

This is REAL cool!

I'm real pissed off with Mac 'cos he's blaming Allegra, when it's his fault! I'm STILL annoyed by it! He he!

Psymon's getting help! YAY! Keep updating!

WOW

Update c'mon UPDATE DAMMIT

AW! I LOVE IT!

Sincerely,

CoLLiSiOn

kewl... twisted, 2 dead, who's next?

Just read chappys 5 and 6...Whats Mac talking about? It was HIM that came on to her...woah. This has really got going wierd. Which is good! Keep writing!

Good story...Mac needs to work out what he wants though! I hope Kaori finds out...I luv drama! He he!

Sorry I haven't reviewed I've been busy I love your stories, and I like the idea of Psymon and Zoe being siblings.

Remember it's BrodI not BrodY