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Eru no Tsubasa 12/11/10 . chapter 1
Cute and sweet! XD
MistyWing 2/5/10 . chapter 1
Syaoran in TRC will always be the lost puppy in need of rescue in our eyes.

This was another well done fic.
chibi sakura yuki 8/14/09 . chapter 1
i want to hug him
Mokyn 5/29/08 . chapter 1
Going through the really old fanfics on looking for something good. I got my wish, I really liked this. Syaoran's thought process through this fic being so clipped and simple fits well with how he was before he became friends with Sakura, and the last line ("he wonders if he will learn to smile at her") set off a huge "aw!" moment.
Sakura 5/12/07 . chapter 1
So cute
James Birdsong 3/13/07 . chapter 1
Good
loveoftoday 8/11/06 . chapter 1
It may be just me, but this seems to be 'lonely'. It's different from what I normally read and I like it as well.

n_n
Insanity Team A.k.a. Violet 11/26/05 . chapter 1
No worries, I think that is a very long forgotten way of treating Syaoran-kun. Keep up the good work, I mean it, your work is good.
Noir Rose 10/7/05 . chapter 1
Very cool and very cute! I love the way you desribed Syaoran's thoughts! Keep up the good work!
ani 9/25/05 . chapter 1
it is to good!

i like this. it's nice to see someone expanding on the memories we get to see so little of.

and i love how you did clow. isn't it so nice that so little is known of him? love the touya-ouji line!
Grimauldi 9/11/05 . chapter 1
Because he IS a puppy! A Little Puppy! And why is Clamp a Borg? Wait, off topic... that was an adorable story, it made me want to adopt a Syaoran, too!
Ciircee 9/1/05 . chapter 1
I adore you. I love your Clow because I think you nailed him dead on. I love that he says Touya isn't going to like him very much (hee!) and I love the way he just seems to know things (because that's the Clow we all know and love).

I love your Syaoran becuase he is wee and precious. I like that he doesn't remember to call Fujitaka 'father' and that he wonders if he's ever seen a girl like Sakura before.

You have such lovely, lovely work.
drinktea 8/25/05 . chapter 1
*fangirl squeal* CUTE! And I don't mind the treating him like a puppy, every touch in this was perfect XD I love everything I've read by you so far, seriously. You're great at this one-shot stuff
Wing xD 4/28/05 . chapter 1
Oh gosh, I just found this lol. So cute
EvoAngel 3/30/05 . chapter 1
NO! Keep treatin him like a puppy! Love you!
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