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Mokyn
2008-05-29
ch 1,
abuseGoing through the really old fanfics on looking for something good. I got my wish, I really liked this. Syaoran's thought process through this fic being so clipped and simple fits well with how he was before he became friends with Sakura, and the last line ("he wonders if he will learn to smile at her") set off a huge "aw~!" moment.
Sakura
2007-05-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseSo cute~
James Birdsong
2007-03-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseGood
IAmSpaz
2006-08-11
ch 1,
abuseIt may be just me, but this seems to be 'lonely'. It's different from what I normally read and I like it as well.

n_n
Insanity Team! (A.k.a. Viol...
2005-11-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseNo worries, I think that is a very long forgotten way of treating Syaoran-kun. Keep up the good work, I mean it, your work is good.
Noir Rose
2005-10-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery cool and very cute!! I love the way you desribed Syaoran's thoughts! Keep up the good work!
ani
2005-09-25
ch 1,
abuseit is to good!

i like this. it's nice to see someone expanding on the memories we get to see so little of.

and i love how you did clow. isn't it so nice that so little is known of him? love the touya-ouji line!
Grimauldi
2005-09-11
ch 1,
abuseBecause he IS a puppy! A Little Puppy! And why is Clamp a Borg? Wait, off topic... that was an adorable story, it made me want to adopt a Syaoran, too!
Ciircee
2005-09-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseI adore you. I love your Clow because I think you nailed him dead on. I love that he says Touya isn't going to like him very much (hee!) and I love the way he just seems to know things (because that's the Clow we all know and love).

I love your Syaoran becuase he is wee and precious. I like that he doesn't remember to call Fujitaka 'father' and that he wonders if he's ever seen a girl like Sakura before.

You have such lovely, lovely work.
Sakura-Angel2
2005-08-25
ch 1,
abuse*fangirl squeal* CUTE! And I don't mind the treating him like a puppy, every touch in this was perfect XD I love everything I've read by you so far, seriously. You're great at this one-shot stuff~
Wing xD
2005-04-28
ch 1,
abuseOh gosh, I just found this lol. So cute~
EvoAngel
2005-03-30
ch 1,
abuseNO! Keep treatin him like a puppy! Love you!
Miss Anonymous
2005-03-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt was good, an interesting read. ^_^ Tis a good idea as to what happened in that one scene... uh, you know the one I'm talking about, right? 'Cause I'm too lazy to describe it now...

Anyway, keep up the good work. v^.^
Bayta
2005-03-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseaw i thought it was sweet:)
green sea
2005-03-13
ch 1,
abuseReally Cool! Update soon... Love Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle!
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