That was beautifully written. Chilling to the bone. I love your imagry!

Highly scary. Very well written and seriously mysterious. Well done.

holy *! that's one freaky story u got started! keep writing i can't wait! i'm gonna write a really horrifing story, so keep reading!

great start! i heart angst!

well... i'm creeped out... update soon!

*Thrilling* beginning! Neither Harry nor I will be able to forget the "boy" (if dead boy he is indeed) for a very long time, I'm afraid. And I can barely wait to see what horrors you have in store for him, if all the rest match up to the clincial, awful, glassy horror of the first thing he saw...

interesting so far...

O! Scary! That is a terrible sight! I feel so sorry for the first year!