This is beautiful! I love the innocent love in Suboshi's eyes and Yui's chance to be happy. Keep writing!

great short story

Aw! I've hardly read/seen the series, and I'm am a total fan of this couple! This is really good, and sweet! (Hopeless romantic here) Really good job!!

First Chapter I was about to cry T_T...now this chapter I'm happy! ^^ Yui and Suboshi would have been an awesome couple...I just wish I could find some awesome fanart of them...

XD omg that was so good! plz plz write more!! must have more, must have more *chant!!* great job- ja!

My thoughts coincide with Yui's. How and why...?

Waiting for the next chapter. :)

You've got to update soon! I love this fic ^^

so sweet...

It's sad...*sigh* why wouldn't Yui accept Suboshi in the first place...^^" Anyway nice fic, keep up!

Very sad! Why did you have to end it this way? It’s awful…*starts bawling* This is a different side of Yui that I’ve probably never seen…sorry I lied, she’s good and evil at the same time. Sometimes she seems like a caring individual, but then if you tick her off on one of her bad days, she’ll kill you in a heartbeat. I’m kind of neutral when it comes to Yui, because in a way she feels that the whole world is against her and the only friends she knows are the ones that apparently kill for pleasure. Anyway, I’m probably looking into this too deeply, but that’s how I see it. It great that you expressed her in a more sensitive light, since my friend can’t stand her…sorry. From this one shot, you almost feel sympathy for her, now that she’s truly alone in the world.

I'd like to think, at that point where Suboshi stood over Yui sama, he knew she loved him. Souls know, when u cross over to the other side, u tend to be more sensitive than u were in life.

So Yui, he knows. How abt a sequel where Yui meets him again?

*squeals* so kawaii and sad at the same time... T_T... that was so good! great work!XD

*sob* too late! too late! i was always angry at yui for not liking suboshi back. grr! >:( well anyway good story, very angsty! (angst is good ^^)

that was very sad WA (tears) but it was very good! ^^"