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| Ducky in Spandex 2008-07-09 ch 1,  | abuseAww... This was so pretty and sad. It has such an innocent, childlike rhyme that serves as a veneer over the sorrow that Auron feels. I love it. |
| Bratney 2005-02-04 ch 1, | abusetear! |
| Avelera 2004-10-17 ch 1, | abuseCute, very cute (cute is my word for good btw) ^_^ Most certainly better than my Auron/Yuna one :-P |
| Dwarves Inc 2004-10-02 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. It's totally authentic and it's a great description of Auron's feelings for Rikku. One of the best poems/oneshots I've read. Overall Grade: A+ |
| Luv2Game 2004-10-01 ch 1, | abusePretty good. I thought it was kinda funny when you said 'damned Al-Bhed'. I know it's suposed to be sad, but I can find humor in most anything. Well, anyways, good job! |
| shadows-of-flame 2004-09-30 ch 1, | abuseoh wow... this is really good! please find the rikku one! |