too close to my story. in the next chapter, i'll be sure to leave margin for your own story to twist in.

now that i read it in your story, my story, well, that chapter semmed quite, petty if you will. i'd change it but i'd end up having to change the whole story. oh, and here's a bit of a preview, again if you will, of the next chapter, we get separated! the whole group gets separated!

*sigh* mango deprieved still...Great update, ne?
Honey and chocolate? I'll have to decipher cuz nothing's too hard for me!! *teacher gives social studies work* Wha?...*examines it* HISTORY DAY!! Gah! Brain...melting *twitches as husky plushie begins typing* She will return to her 'normal' state after a few hours of sugar intake. Oi...the insanity of coffee drenched sugar, not sugar drenched coffee. I still don't know how she takes it straight though. Wait...she waking, better save the neighborhod from her...*sigh*
Signing-off
-Brye and Xilver

Poor Sephy-sama...I got milk on my pant once, I smelled like American cheese! anyway, this is to make-up for the other reveiw. Dun get lazy an stop updating like William. *gasp* I just typed his name for the world to see!...was I supposed to do that? Oh, and yes, I am a neat freak so I suppose the stuff would have been cleared-out. ^^

-The imeasurably imperfect Xilver

hm...the story was spiffy i guess. Just don't hurt me!

awesome! i can't believe your relation to my story yet making it your own... pure artistic ability.

i can't believe a good story such as this came from mine. and to think that i thought you were just a procrastinator.

O. You and Piggy must update or...something bad will happen!