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mac-c
2009-10-14 . chapter 1
WOW! it's...wow..OUCH!...wow...cruel, dark, fantastic...wow...
licensedtolive
2009-09-01 . chapter 1
Absolutely beautiful. I realised I've been re-reading it for a while now and forget to review everytime, so I'm making up for it now. I loved Voldemort - absolutely in character, more refined version of the other Voldemorts I see in fanfiction who slurs his speech and hiss around. I can see the Tom Riddle in him, which is really good. And I loved how you turned this into a theme on ordinary people dying in a war larger than themselves. Beautiful (:
Elisa Mirror
2009-02-13 . chapter 1
Dark. And, well, in fact I sometimes used to wonder what would happen if someone ordinary had to suffer due to great causes. It's not fair, actually. To die. Just because.
Pray for me. Pray
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
oh that was dark and touching! Especially the bit when Dumbledore refuses to give up Harry...even though its probably not canon.
Kevyn
2008-08-17 . chapter 1
I really love this piece. It's fascinating and dark without being graphically violent, which I think takes some skill. I read this again every so often & only now realized I hadn't reviewed.

So I love it. Many thanks for the story.

~K.
ThereAre666Ways2Love
2008-07-17 . chapter 1
Wow, this was great. It left me speechless. I love the plot and the idea behind it. It really makes you think. I loved this piece, you're a wonderful writer!
Kikuneechan
2008-04-27 . chapter 1
I like this. :)

Dark, morbid, but it also brings out a brilliant point. Excellent story here.
NaiteShyde
2008-01-05 . chapter 1
Wow, I must say this is a really good story. I love the plot line! Especially that fact that it is terribly true, Dumbledore does put Harry above all else and whatever poor child Voldemort had captured would have been left to die. The concept is horribly fascinating now that you look at it this way, for me at least. Anyways I do hope you write more, I loved this piece.
Emriel
2007-09-14 . chapter 1
... wah *bawls eye out*

Ordinary people can't do anything because they are insignificant and unecessary... >
aGreatPenName
2007-08-12 . chapter 1
@.@

That was both entertaining and horrifying
InkyJasper
2007-07-25 . chapter 1
wow. That was so amazing.
The Patient
2007-07-24 . chapter 1
that, was absolutely, undoubtedly the most amazing well-written story i have ever read. i loved the way you just picked an ordinary girl, nothing special, just one out of a million. but in a way, her being randomly chosen made her a little special in the end. i love it, and i encourage you to write more! i also think if you tried to rewrite it, to see what you could add or change, would make it even more amazing. :)
LilyHellsing
2007-07-16 . chapter 1
Eh. While I must admit that was stupid at the end, it did have some good parts. Not my fav. but I like it
chozen1
2006-06-19 . chapter 1
i found this on schnoogle too but couldnt review
here it goes

omg this story is so amazing!
i like the LV. he seems really. sociopathic n crazy. its neat
the girl...well too bad for ehr. but it wa lovely story. i really liked it
The Gypsy-Pirate Queen
2006-06-03 . chapter 1
Wow. That's just all I can say. Wow.
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