I had fun reading this one...though I would have preferred it if Loki and Fenris slow-danced toghether...WHAT? I think it would be sweet that way...but if you DID make them slow dance together, i think your story would lose some of its power and turn into an emo story. It's fun and you should keep it at that. I think you're an okay writer. Not bad, but not amazing writer, though your style is already sturdy but will be great if you practised and formed it a littel more.

Wowie! That was really really cute!
I congratulate you.. it was well written =) You described Comodo so well that the readers could actually imagine themselves dancing by the shore =P
Wah..why must it be a one-shot though?! Sequel please!

more power to you!

i liked it alot and it was very cute

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Bravo! Update!

Whee... ^_^ Fenris/Loki just makes me happee. Hahaha. ...Not really, didn't notice any...er, bad undertones. Maybe it's good I didn't. ^_^

write more, please!

...hey, zhakeena-san, that was really good...no, it's great...really...

Loving these, loving these, loving these very much ! hahahaha... It's me, Lady_Assassin... you wrote nice ficcy

I like your fic^^ I mean it ^^; it's cute and I was fascinated by the story...

*thumbs up* sugoi. Just right. ^_^

Next chappie! Whoo!

Uwah! ^_^ I still love this story! ^_^

Heheh...wow. I've NEVER been a fan of LokixFenris, but this was actually really good! What a cute story~ Like all your others, it's great! /no1

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