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Kaewi 2005-08-17 ch 24,	abuseI know you wrote this awhile ago, but I just thought i'd let you know how amazing I thought it was. Very accurate characters, very consistant and believable plot. Nice long chapters too! I enjoyed reading it very much. I'll have to read the second part now and get caught up.
sclub 2005-03-19 ch 24,	abuseWell done :) I can't think of what else to say. So well written.
gelf 2004-11-15 ch 23,	abusehow did I miss this chapter? I have no idea. sad and sweet and short and straight to the point. just perfect.
gelf 2004-11-15 ch 24,	abusegood chapter. and happy birthday. good ending too.
koalared 2004-11-14 ch 24, anon.	abuseSorry for not reviewing individual chapters. This is a great story. Well thought out, well written and a joy to read. Thanx
chauncey 2004-11-14 ch 24, anon.	abusecool r u gonna do another chapter?
Dolphine 2004-11-13 ch 24, anon.	abuseHihi...Just want to say that this is really a wonderful story. I just want to let you know I have been following it and checking for updates all the time. THank you for entertaining readers like us. I really look forward to the continuing series...keep it up!
Animiga 2004-11-13 ch 24,	abuseYea! Such a good story. I looked foreward to every update. I loved how you had Emma almost reading Jesse, but making sure that she actually asked instead of assumed. The E/J relationship was so good in this story. Anxiously awaiting further installments...mayhaps something where he tells the President what's happening - you know, see that relationship? Keep up the good writing, and Happy Birthday!
brigitta1 2004-11-13 ch 24, anon.	abuseHAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR AMBER HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! Without any sound, cause my singing would break all of your windows and probably your computer! LOL I am also really sorry for not reviewing your last chapter. My only excuse is that I wanted to do it, but forgot. One hell of a lazy excuse isn't it? I really really like this story, from the first till the last letter. And a sequel or something would make me really happy :) You write very well and have enjoyed your writing. So lets make a deal: If you write, I'll review. And if I don't please come and kick my *! wink* Because your stories are to valuable for not reviewing! (well at least that is my opinion.) So please keep writing. You have at least one person that loves it :)
aniki19 2004-11-13 ch 24, anon.	abusefrowns why is it tt everytime e MX team sits down to eat for dinner, japanese food always seems to be e choice? lol! hhmm...i can't say i am a huge fan of sushi...(i only eat e cooked ones..lame but true)i prefer somthing more spicy but i can see e novelty of having japanese food i guess..(wasabi rocks,man!) sorry if i kinda forgot to review e previous chpt n i hope this one makes up for it...sheepish grin hmm... so now...they r only 4 kids tt they really have to rescue...n e rest r just clones? thinks abt it for a while wow...tt's a lot of clones... i really hope u'll do a sequel to all this n while ur at it..how abt a prequel too coz...i think u could explore how lexa really broke jesse heart n how he met up with emma...oh n a little bit on shal n brenn relationship too...please? flashes amber her cute smile tt never fails pretty,pretty please? last but not least...happy belated birthday!throws amber a mini party yay! ur one year older n hopefully non-the-wiser..lol! my bday's coming up too...hopefully i will have a new chpt posted by then... lifting up a glass of soft drink for a toast here's wishing u lots more happy b'days...n lots more stories to come,k? cheers!
KatKnits00 2004-11-12 ch 24,	abusePlease continue. This is good.
KatKnits00 2004-11-04 ch 22,	abuseClones? All the children are Pierce's clones. That was a big surprise. Never saw that coming. Poor Jesse he certainly has had an exhausting day in more ways than one. Hopefully he won't be out for too long and will be able to deal with everything when he comes to.
aniki19 2004-11-03 ch 22, anon.	abusereaches out a comforting hand to jesse n amber sniffs yeah wat a bummer...e guy i was rooting for didn't win either...n i don't even live there! yup...i guess ur fears r as good as mine... hopefully something happens soon...i don't know...u know..a stroke, a heart attack...take ur pick... reads over wat was written oopss...i'm so evil...but then...evil ppl r ruling e planet...so who do we take after,huh? sometimes having choices sucks when e choices r never really urs in e 1st place but don worry...hopefully he'll turn over a new leaf or something n rest assured u have something to ook forward to in 4 yrs time. k...back to e story...poor jesse; it's all just a little bit too much,huh? wat do u mean..e kids r like pierce? the have e same genes? i.e jesse's, emma n lexa's dna? woah...way too much stuff for one day...n this is getting too long...so ciao!
gelf 2004-11-03 ch 22,	abuse(ditto here on the election) good chapter girl. nice mix of dark and hope. (maybe there is hope for our country soon) nice touch with the Amish (I'm a citi-fied Amish myself). can't wait to see where you go next with this.
feralsprite 2004-11-02 ch 21, anon.	abuseyou've got a great story here amber! please finish it soon!!

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