I know you wrote this awhile ago, but I just thought i'd let you know how amazing I thought it was. Very accurate characters, very consistant and believable plot. Nice long chapters too! I enjoyed reading it very much. I'll have to read the second part now and get caught up.

Well done :) I can't think of what else to say. So well written.

how did I miss this chapter? I have no idea.
sad and sweet and short and straight to the point. just perfect.

good chapter.
and happy birthday.

good ending too.

Sorry for not reviewing individual chapters. This is a great story. Well thought out, well written and a joy to read. Thanx

cool r u gonna do another chapter?

Hihi...Just want to say that this is really a wonderful story. I just want to let you know I have been following it and checking for updates all the time. THank you for entertaining readers like us. I really look forward to the continuing series...keep it up!

Yea! Such a good story. I looked foreward to every update. I loved how you had Emma almost reading Jesse, but making sure that she actually asked instead of assumed. The E/J relationship was so good in this story. Anxiously awaiting further installments...mayhaps something where he tells the President what's happening - you know, see that relationship? Keep up the good writing, and Happy Birthday!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR AMBER
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!

Without any sound, cause my singing would break all of your windows and probably your computer! LOL

I am also really sorry for not reviewing your last chapter. My only excuse is that I wanted to do it, but forgot. One hell of a lazy excuse isn't it?

I really really like this story, from the first till the last letter.
And a sequel or something would make me really happy :)

You write very well and have enjoyed your writing.

So lets make a deal: If you write, I'll review. And if I don't please come and kick my **! *wink*
Because your stories are to valuable for not reviewing! (well at least that is my opinion.)

So please keep writing. You have at least one person that loves it :)

*frowns* why is it tt everytime e MX team sits down to eat for dinner, japanese food always seems to be e choice? lol! hhmm...i can't say i am a huge fan of sushi...(i only eat e cooked ones..lame but true)i prefer somthing more spicy but i can see e novelty of having japanese food i guess..(wasabi rocks,man!)
sorry if i kinda forgot to review e previous chpt n i hope this one makes up for it...*sheepish grin*
hmm... so now...they r only 4 kids tt they really have to rescue...n e rest r just clones? *thinks abt it for a while* wow...tt's a lot of clones...
i really hope u'll do a sequel to all this n while ur at it..how abt a prequel too coz...i think u could explore how lexa really broke jesse heart n how he met up with emma...oh n a little bit on shal n brenn relationship too...please? *flashes amber her cute smile tt never fails* pretty,pretty please?
last but not least...happy belated birthday!*throws amber a mini party* yay! ur one year older n hopefully non-the-wiser..lol!
my bday's coming up too...hopefully i will have a new chpt posted by then...
*lifting up a glass of soft drink for a toast*
here's wishing u lots more happy b'days...n lots more stories to come,k? cheers!

Please continue. This is good.

Clones? All the children are Pierce's clones. That was a big surprise. Never saw that coming. Poor Jesse he certainly has had an exhausting day in more ways than one. Hopefully he won't be out for too long and will be able to deal with everything when he comes to.

*reaches out a comforting hand to jesse n amber*
*sniffs* yeah wat a bummer...e guy i was rooting for didn't win either...n i don't even live there! yup...i guess ur fears r as good as mine...
hopefully something happens soon...i don't know...u know..a stroke, a heart attack...take ur pick...
*reads over wat was written*
oopss...i'm so evil...but then...evil ppl r ruling e planet...so who do we take after,huh?
sometimes having choices sucks when e choices r never really urs in e 1st place but don worry...hopefully he'll turn over a new leaf or something n rest assured u have something to ook forward to in 4 yrs time.
k...back to e story...poor jesse; it's all just a little bit too much,huh? wat do u mean..e kids r like pierce? the have e same genes? i.e jesse's, emma n lexa's dna? woah...way too much stuff for one day...n this is getting too long...so ciao!

(ditto here on the election) good chapter girl. nice mix of dark and hope. (maybe there is hope for our country soon) nice touch with the Amish (I'm a citi-fied Amish myself). can't wait to see where you go next with this.

you've got a great story here amber! please finish it soon!!