This is absolutely brilliant. XD Feels rather sorry for the Sanbutsushin. Yay for Tenpou!

I LOVED this. thank you.

*reads the last part and spits out noodles.*

BWAHAHAHAhAAh! LOL! I love the ending.

Very awesome...I don't think I've ever laughed so hard in my life. And it explains so very much. Very nice.

This was hysterical. I read it a long time ago, but don't know if I ever told you just how much I enjoyed it. Very well done!

This is good.

You can just see the whole scene happening in the anime or the manga. Very nice, so Tempou-ish/Hakkai-ish to very politely argue/drive someone mad!I laughed through the whole thing ^--^

Anyway good job!

how did i not see this before... i congratulate you on your hilarity and genius! i had a perfect image in my head of this whole thing, it made me laugh so much lol

HILARIOUS!

I am so tossing this into my favorites. I practically fell out of my chair laughing! I loved the way you wrote it. And the whole story somehow flows together.
-LadyFireCat

This is perfect. Absolutely perfect.

Take the /original/ original, and try to make it fit... there's a lot of /bits/ that need to be cut off and twisted around to fit in...

Once again, the Three Aspects curse their drawing of the Three Short Straws.

This had me in absolute stitches, I swear. Funny, in a screwed up kind of way, but so delivious and irresistable. I loved the story. This whole idea was just... hilarious.

You're amazing. Really.

Haha! The Sanbutsushin must have been so exasperated!

^^, Kanzeon must have been so amused just watching that exchange! ^^, And the ending was absolutely golden! haha!!

You. Me. Babies. Now. D: Holy crap, that was beautifully written and Hakkai (bless the dude) managed to be amusing as hell without being OOC. Wonderful piece of work.

LOL! Cho Hakkai/Cho Gono/Tenpou Gensui can be annoying at times with his very scrutinizing and smart personality, ne?

*Cracking up* Oh, I honestly don't know who to feel sorry for here, lol...