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Reviews for: Sweet Betrayal
MatOdin
2009-10-12 . chapter 2
It so sad how Egwene is passed around like that. Although it's practically funny, it is very sad.
:0 :( :) :^|
BlackWolfHellHound
2008-01-09 . chapter 2
I would like to see you add to this. I think its a good story, and the pairing is interesting. Good description. I hope you'll update soon.

~BWHH
Cougaress
2005-11-08 . chapter 2
Quite a dilemma you've created for Egwene and Moiraine. I must say that I'm enjoying it thus far, but to end it there would be diastrous. I believe that I might just become ultimately obsessive if you don't continue it. This story has great potential, especially for plot development, if only you would continue it.
I haven't much to criticise, though I will remind you be true to the characters personalities and mannerisms. Take time to develop the story and watch for simple things like grammer.
Well done, I look forward to another chapter.
Shireece
2005-07-25 . chapter 1
Very enjoyable story ^^ keep up the good work.
*wink*
Arian
2005-06-25 . chapter 1
Egwene and...Moiraine...? Ugh, ugh, ugh, ugh, and ew
Banshee Queen
2005-06-07 . chapter 2
Omg this was great! My only real complain was that I wish this would've been longer! This was great! Keep writing!

Banshee Queen.

P.S A cheeky Moiraine eh? Gotta' love that Aes Sedai. :D
icewinnowill
2005-06-03 . chapter 2
I liked the second chapter much better than the first...

...but you already know that!
Marie
2005-06-03 . chapter 2
42! 42!

But yeah, other than that it was good.
Miroku'sbitch69
2005-01-01 . chapter 1
Dude that was good. I'm les my self and i have to say that you did very well. Please write more.
kat
2004-10-05 . chapter 1
woho! WOW! my god that was god!!
Elven Sage
2004-10-02 . chapter 1
lol...wow...that's sort of funny. And I kind of feel sorry for Egwene..she really had no say; just being passed on from one to the other...but she didn't seem to mind...lol. Ended a bit suddenly, but it was good.
Katherine-Magnolia
2004-10-01 . chapter 1
Oh, love it. ^_^ Job well done, I liked it quite well. I always thought that a Nynaeve/Egwene pairing would be interesting, though throwing Egwene in with Moiraine was just as much so. Well done indeed, not bad for your first third-person.

~Jer
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