 MatOdin 2009-10-12 . chapter 2It so sad how Egwene is passed around like that. Although it's practically funny, it is very sad.
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 BlackWolfHellHound 2008-01-09 . chapter 2I would like to see you add to this. I think its a good story, and the pairing is interesting. Good description. I hope you'll update soon.
~BWHH |
 Cougaress 2005-11-08 . chapter 2Quite a dilemma you've created for Egwene and Moiraine. I must say that I'm enjoying it thus far, but to end it there would be diastrous. I believe that I might just become ultimately obsessive if you don't continue it. This story has great potential, especially for plot development, if only you would continue it.
I haven't much to criticise, though I will remind you be true to the characters personalities and mannerisms. Take time to develop the story and watch for simple things like grammer.
Well done, I look forward to another chapter. |
 Shireece 2005-07-25 . chapter 1Very enjoyable story ^^ keep up the good work.
*wink* |
 Arian 2005-06-25 . chapter 1 Egwene and...Moiraine...? Ugh, ugh, ugh, ugh, and ew |
 Banshee Queen 2005-06-07 . chapter 2Omg this was great! My only real complain was that I wish this would've been longer! This was great! Keep writing!
Banshee Queen.
P.S A cheeky Moiraine eh? Gotta' love that Aes Sedai. :D |
 icewinnowill 2005-06-03 . chapter 2 I liked the second chapter much better than the first...
...but you already know that! |
 Marie 2005-06-03 . chapter 2 42! 42!
But yeah, other than that it was good. |
 Miroku'sbitch69 2005-01-01 . chapter 1 Dude that was good. I'm les my self and i have to say that you did very well. Please write more. |
 kat 2004-10-05 . chapter 1 woho! WOW! my god that was god!! |
 Elven Sage 2004-10-02 . chapter 1lol...wow...that's sort of funny. And I kind of feel sorry for Egwene..she really had no say; just being passed on from one to the other...but she didn't seem to mind...lol. Ended a bit suddenly, but it was good. |
 Katherine-Magnolia 2004-10-01 . chapter 1Oh, love it. ^_^ Job well done, I liked it quite well. I always thought that a Nynaeve/Egwene pairing would be interesting, though throwing Egwene in with Moiraine was just as much so. Well done indeed, not bad for your first third-person.
~Jer |