aw oh by the way im back sorry i havent updated but my comps been down and now all my files are erased so i have to retype up all i did for chapter 5

very beautiful and profound

"...I don’t want to lose another..."

I felt the emotion just jump out from the screen and into my being. Thank you for the powerful essence of love. Beautifully captured here. :)

"At an early age I knew I was

by her side but never in her heart.

Thanks to her I learned to walk,

first to be by her side and then out of her life."

Very powerful and wonderful. I love it.

Aww..how sad and bitter sweet. I liked it a lot, very angsty ^_^