Oh my... this fic is really beautiful... Brought tears to my eyes.

I love how you wrote it.

I really thought you were going to kill Aiden, but I'm glad you didn't...

Really good job ;)

Nikki: i think i am ur number 1 fan...i luv you don't ever stop writing or i will cry for...well forever,i luv your work.Keep it up...SHEPFORD 4ever

-Ja ne-

Nikki: can i smother you with affection? (smothers) that was wonderful,brillient you deserve an award like a pulitzr for best ShepFord angst romance...keep writing

-Ja ne-

Nikki: (crying like a baby)

Malik muse: Uh she thought it was great but she can't speak right now so what she told me to say was good job...keep writing ShepFord and spread it to the world or something like that...

-Ja ne-

Nikki:Ok that was 2 cute for words...when sheppard gets on the bed and hugs Ford, i swear, i was teary eyed, oh i love this pairing so much. Don't kill Ford! He's too sexy to die. (Kills evil alien 4 da millionth time) ur an awsome writer, keep it up,me love ShepFord

-Ja ne-

Nikki: WHAT? (kills evil alien with help from Sheppard) I can't believe that bastard gave Ford cancer...(kills alien again) however, great chappie,now for the other 4

-Ja ne-

Nikki:I luv this fic,i'm soo worried about Ford...don't hurt him...well i'm gonna go and review 2 ur other chappies,

-Ja ne-

"John slowly tread across the cluttered room and knelt at his friend's bedside. (Gaigun had been kind enough to clean up the blood.)"

Flow problems; try something like this:

John slowly tread across the cluttered room and knelt at his friend's bedside, thankful that Gaigun had been kind enough to clean up the blood.

:) When overall it's a strong writer, small interruptions in the flow like this are liable to drag me out of lurkdom.

O! angsty! i can't wait to see what happens!

o! the plot thickens! I am hooked now! write more soon!

Wow, this rocks! You should continue this.