try reading this while listening to "you told me you loved me" by cinematic sunrise . it sure adds to the drama ! just a thought .. xD . kudos !

AWESOME!! i really loved it! you really did a GREAT job with the nashsierra combination! and i really envy you for that! kudos!

Aw... I also love this! Good job! Brilliant!

I've waited to so long for Nash/Sierra fics! T_T This was simply superb. I love the characterization. :) Now I hope I get to finish my own Nash/Sierra fic, too...it's been rotting for years. XD

nice story!! it's like the "away at bati" (that's in filipino terms love and hate) relationship ba...galing!!

I rather liked this. ^^ They way you've written the interaction between these two, it's almost as though this is a scene right out of Gaiden I. Just one little thing. "He ignored the inner dialogue." Sorta sounds a little stiff.

All in all, it was a very enjoyable read.

I apologize for the delay in reviewing your fic... College keeps me on my toes, so I don't have as much time to indulge in Suikoden fanfiction so much anymore, even Nash-based ones. ;_;

Anyway, despite the fact that I've been grasping for any excuse to believe that Nash was in fact, unmarried, I must say that this was fantastic. I think you probably know that I am very much a Chris/Nash shipper, but I'm am not closed to other pairings. In fact, in my last fic 'Web of Lies', there was probably just as interaction between Nash and Sierra as there was with Nash and Chris. Writing about them gave me more appreciation for the couple, and so has reading this fic!

You wrote both the characters and their complex emotions towards each other quite well. It is difficult to write Nash from the Suikogaiden series, but I think you successfully captured Nash's youth well while keeping the characteristics we know so well from Suikoden 3. The dialogue was in-character and amusing(isn't writing Nash/Sierra dialogue great fun!!?) and it had the right amount of romance.

Overall, I really liked it and I think you should be proud of it! Keep up the good fic writing!

~Lady G

THis was a great story honestly. I love Sierra, definitely one of my favorite characters. Nash is absolutely hysterical as well, I could see him actualy saying all of this. Anyway, wonderful writing, wonderful subject. I hope to see more of your work.

Entertaining and well-written; it draws the reader in almost immediately. A little different from what I figured had happened (my Gaiden knowledge unfortunately is limited to summaries I can find on websites), but when the writer can make sparks fly and have it be entirely plausible, I consider that quite an accomplishment. Good job. And a nice take on the two parting ways.

Although I'm unfamiliar with the Gaiden games, and Sierra for that matter, I did enjoy this story. Both of them seem very real, and their dialogue is easy and natural.

The only part I'm not sure about is Nash having tears in his eyes. How long have they known each other at this point? That could come into play there.

Good work.

Wow ! This is the best fiction I've ever read 1. You are really talented.The coversation between Nash and Sierra were perfectly well written. They were in character. Plaese write more. I really love your work.Thanks for writing this piece of art ! ^^

Yatta! Thankyou very much for sending me a mail about your new story. ^^.

Now, onto the actual review!

I thought it was really good. I mean -really- good. Their characters weren't blown out of proportion like many other stories like this, and they were always in-character.
They said things that I would've expected them to say in such a situation - and it was a very interesting situation you put them through by the way. ^^. Like your other one, it's so sad though. ; ;

I didn't play Suikogaiden, so i don;t reli noe much about Sierra and Nash together^^
but i thought the fic was pretty good~
an enjoyable read^__^
~Never the same~

This story makes me squee in delight. The length was perfect, not so short that it gets on my nerves, not too long that i get bored, but a nice length. Thank goodness you didn't do cliffhangers or something.. I would have to kill you..

I really liked the story, especially how you put the characters into action.