I think Anakin means its 'quiet, not quite'... A few spelling errors, but other than that, it's terrific.

omg that was brilliant!! I'm picking up something between Verne and Marlene...--euh Marley...I knew it was a Tanen!! There's just a few minor spelling mistakes like note is writtent note and not not but except for thatit was great!

Can't wait for the rest

You know SIX languages? Wow. I only know two and bits of others here and there... My classmate knows five (English, Chinese, French, Korean, Malay) and I thought that was a lot.

It's spelt 'Hill Valley', not 'HillVally' - just thought I'd let you know.

Nice story, except for some spelling mistakes here and there ('quiet' not 'quiet'). Continue!

Did Tannen do this?
It is good that Verne went to Marty for help. If all else fails, talk to the person who is the first time traveler. Great, keep it up

great begining!! I can't wait to read the rest!! hm I'm curious to know who the heck is gonna kidnap the family...if I can trust my guessing...is it gonna be a Tannen or one of the boys who called Verne a Goldi lock?? HAHAHA I loved that line!

I have difficulty picturing Verne with long hair! Keep up the good job!!

oh, good one, can't wait to see more. Keep it up, I like the way the brothers interact and such. Would love to see another chapter.