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imatwilightfan
2009-10-01 . chapter 11
i feel for both naruto and hinata. hinata, with all she had to deal with naruto's memory loss and and his moods, thoughts, and feelings as well as repressing her feelings so as not to overwhelm naruto. naruto, with all the confusion he feels and frustrations he doesn't know how to deal with along with the fear of losing himself to the kyuubi and everything that goes with it. they're pretty much a screwed up couple with all the drama. hopefully, they can go through all of these together and end up happy in the end with all of naruto's memories intact and accounted for.
jAsI69
2009-09-06 . chapter 11
:O Please continue I: love this story
Dalton Lord
2008-12-27 . chapter 11
I really liked your story and almost everyaspect of it and i really hope you continue it soon, for i have been waiting a while for the next chapter but you haven't put on one yet so i am slightly dissapointed. I want to get some insperation for my storie but i am stuck, i may not be signed in right now but if anyone wants to contact me on anything that has to do with NaruHina or just life it's self be my guest, my e-mail is and please if you continue please inform me ASAP. Hope to hear from you soon.
Dalton
miragenite1
2008-11-13 . chapter 1
It's suck a great story, but no update in two years?
please update, i wannah read the end!
SHeWithNoName
2008-10-14 . chapter 11
AWESOME STORY DUDE!
Jam Bread
2008-04-29 . chapter 11
Your story is really GOOD! I really like it. One of most well written I've read. But at the end of chapter 11 did you mean 'Jounin' instead of 'joni'? Even though I think I know what you meant. But it is still an awesome story! Please keep up the good work!
RaiderXV
2008-03-12 . chapter 11
Good story but has not been updated in over a year. I like it but the angst is very nice, and sad.
DarkHeroOrion
2007-12-22 . chapter 11
From what I have read so far, I have enjoyed this little tale. One thing still irks me though; the dojutsu that the Uchiha clan possesses is known as the SHARINGAN, and not Sharington (that sounds like a last name in my opinion...lol). All kidding aside, I will read more of it, since it is enjoyable, and I will give you my honest feedback.
celtic-pride
2007-12-15 . chapter 11
please update this story its been so long and its such a good story. Please update, I beg of you.
Selverwulf
2007-11-19 . chapter 1
This story is written really well and I really enjoyed read up to the last chapter you posted. Can't wait to read more of it.
lil-c-girl2218
2007-08-06 . chapter 11
Gaah! Had I known that it's been almost a year since you updated, I wouldn't of started to read this >< Cuz now I'm hooked. Please update this story, its really good, and I really wanna know how it ends.
DustedInPastels
2007-07-09 . chapter 11
hey just read ur fic. thought it was great, just the concept of naruto losing a good chunk of memory intrigues. i know its been about a year since u last updated (at least thats what the site says) but im still wondering were the next chapter is. hope u write soon :)
Ikasury
2007-06-11 . chapter 11
Damn are the Hyuuga ** up in your book -.- *shakeing head dismissively* freakin' blind-bastards and their evil schemes, and possible line-breeding (oops did i just refer to them as dogs *evil-grin*) *cough* i mean inter-marriage *mumbles* (** inbred sonsabitches >..< PWEASE!

der, till next (hopefully theirs another chappy T.T) Sayounara!!
-Ikasury
TheKey92
2007-04-22 . chapter 4
awsome story!
Pinkis
2007-04-15 . chapter 11
OMG wow this is so good!
PLease update soon!
THe characters and the plot is just AMAZING!
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