 Rejected Angel 2005-09-25 . chapter 15This is an incredibly interesting story. Some very unique elements have been incorparated, and so far its working really well. After it was confirmed that Ryo was the Kaiser, I couldn't help but picture with amusement the reaction everyone would have if Ruki suddenly showed up and called him 'hero boy'.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to finding out exactly what the hell Ryo is up to. |
 shadowblack 2005-08-02 . chapter 15Hi
It’s been a long time since I last reviewed, but I keep reading all chapters none the less. The story is fi9ne the way it’s going for now. The only problem I can think of is your spelling. I suggest you proofread each chapter at least twice before posting. There are sometimes missing or misspelled words that force me (and probably other readers too) to read some sentences more than once until I figure out what you meant.
Anyway, I hope the next chapter will be ready soon. Bye. |
 Digi fan 2005-07-22 . chapter 15If deamon is the weakest I hate to see the strongest. |
 Western Master 3 2005-07-22 . chapter 15I just had a thought. What if all the chosen digimon dark digivolved at the same time? |
 Anthony1 2005-07-22 . chapter 15A cool chapter with plenty of action and I liked how you showed the concern that Daisuke had for his sister. It really showed the closeness that they have for one another. |
 Digi fan 2005-07-12 . chapter 14A new dark evolution dose not sound good. This was a great chapter. |
 Anthony1 2005-07-11 . chapter 14This chapter was a good way to continue from where you left off in the last one and the moments between the characters was a nice touch. Until you update again, see ya. |
 Digi fan 2005-06-19 . chapter 13What will happen to Ken now. What is a Zohar? |
 Anthony1 2005-06-14 . chapter 13Even if there wasn't much action in the chapter it was still worth reading. It seems as though Iori is going to have a big role in this story which I don't mind. Please do your best in updating again soon. |
 Western Master 3 2005-06-14 . chapter 13The plot thickens. Again. |
 TamerTerra 2005-06-14 . chapter 13Dumdum dam! I like that Iori is better than Takeru, he was getting arrogant. One commeent - use prepositions. |
 Western Master 3 2005-05-25 . chapter 12Not a bad plot twist here. |
 Digi fan 2005-05-24 . chapter 12Will they be able to rescue Ken. Great chapter it was worth the wait. |
 Anthony1 2005-05-23 . chapter 12A nice chapter to continue from the last one. It seems as though the training for the newer DigiDestined is still going on and it'll only be a matter of time until they'll have to go into a major battle. Until next time, see ya. |
 Western Master 3 2005-04-11 . chapter 11Multiple jogress. It's about time someone else thought of that! |