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Rejected Angel
2005-09-25 . chapter 15
This is an incredibly interesting story. Some very unique elements have been incorparated, and so far its working really well. After it was confirmed that Ryo was the Kaiser, I couldn't help but picture with amusement the reaction everyone would have if Ruki suddenly showed up and called him 'hero boy'.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to finding out exactly what the hell Ryo is up to.
shadowblack
2005-08-02 . chapter 15
Hi

It’s been a long time since I last reviewed, but I keep reading all chapters none the less. The story is fi9ne the way it’s going for now. The only problem I can think of is your spelling. I suggest you proofread each chapter at least twice before posting. There are sometimes missing or misspelled words that force me (and probably other readers too) to read some sentences more than once until I figure out what you meant.

Anyway, I hope the next chapter will be ready soon. Bye.
Digi fan
2005-07-22 . chapter 15
If deamon is the weakest I hate to see the strongest.
Western Master 3
2005-07-22 . chapter 15
I just had a thought. What if all the chosen digimon dark digivolved at the same time?
Anthony1
2005-07-22 . chapter 15
A cool chapter with plenty of action and I liked how you showed the concern that Daisuke had for his sister. It really showed the closeness that they have for one another.
Digi fan
2005-07-12 . chapter 14
A new dark evolution dose not sound good. This was a great chapter.
Anthony1
2005-07-11 . chapter 14
This chapter was a good way to continue from where you left off in the last one and the moments between the characters was a nice touch. Until you update again, see ya.
Digi fan
2005-06-19 . chapter 13
What will happen to Ken now. What is a Zohar?
Anthony1
2005-06-14 . chapter 13
Even if there wasn't much action in the chapter it was still worth reading. It seems as though Iori is going to have a big role in this story which I don't mind. Please do your best in updating again soon.
Western Master 3
2005-06-14 . chapter 13
The plot thickens. Again.
TamerTerra
2005-06-14 . chapter 13
Dumdum dam! I like that Iori is better than Takeru, he was getting arrogant. One commeent - use prepositions.
Western Master 3
2005-05-25 . chapter 12
Not a bad plot twist here.
Digi fan
2005-05-24 . chapter 12
Will they be able to rescue Ken. Great chapter it was worth the wait.
Anthony1
2005-05-23 . chapter 12
A nice chapter to continue from the last one. It seems as though the training for the newer DigiDestined is still going on and it'll only be a matter of time until they'll have to go into a major battle. Until next time, see ya.
Western Master 3
2005-04-11 . chapter 11
Multiple jogress. It's about time someone else thought of that!
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