Nice start! Well...go on ; )

it was a great story I realy liked it if you dont write more i'm gonna go crazy ok

it was a great story I realy liked it if you dont write more i'm gonna go crazy ok

it was a great story I realy liked it if you dont write more i'm gonna go crazy ok

That was short

are u gonna write more?

I loved this. Beka and Tyr would make an interesting pair.

LoL.! Cute. Loved the ending, where she is thinking about Tyr. Very Tyr with the explanation of why Tyr wants to help but his line before that didn't quite seem Tyr. In any case, good job.

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ooooooooooooooo, SWEET i liked it, it makes us use our imagination,and make a coll little endin for oursrwlves! _

It's really good. Please add more. A/S/A/P.

Not bad. Are you going to continue or is that the end of the story? I would really like to see this story continued.

It has definet possiblites. A good start as well.