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Reviews For: Sea Creatures

ZekksGoddess
2007-06-04
ch 3,
abuseYour writing just doesn't cease to amaze me.

These were great, you've put into words what I've always thought between Jack and Elizabeth from the movies...only better. :)

Amazing work.
Lily Evanstar
2006-08-20
ch 2,
abuseBeautiful.
Riverbird
2006-07-27
ch 3,
abuseI really loved these little thoughts. They really match the characters well! I really love your writing too! XD
CMP12
2005-07-12
ch 2,
abuseBoth of these are excellent- the second one was my favorite though, as others said...bittersweet.
jenthegypsy
2005-07-11
ch 1,
abuseHello there, silly girl! No, *I* am the silly girl! I don't think I have ever read this - it is lovely, with the hint of fantasy and of mystery that is our Jack so subtly presented. And such a perfect closing sentence. Hugs little ficlet close, so it won't slip away. Jen
CaptainTish
2005-07-04
ch 2,
abuseVery well-written, rather poetic. I love your Jack/Elizabeth stories. Write more!
Indigo Spirit
2004-11-19
ch 1,
abuseI really like this. I thought it was great.
Shadow Phenix
2004-10-10
ch 1,
abuseThe story reminds me a lot of the heavenly maiden and her robes. I like it, and I can really think of Jack in that sort of way. Lovely, as always.
CaptainTish
2004-10-03
ch 1,
abuseGood story. Have you seen the movie The Secret of Roan Inish? It's about Selkies. Anyway, liked your story. Short and sweet. And 200 words is better than 100 words, anyway!
wellduh...
2004-10-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseLovely, really, kind of bittersweet and sad. I'm going to remember this one. It's great writing. Please, keep up the work.
padme17
2004-10-03
ch 1,
abuseoh I like that story! It was so touching. Keep up the good work!
Missy Mouse
2004-10-03
ch 1,
abuseOh. My. Goodness.

That was... wow.
AuntStinky
2004-10-02
ch 1,
abuseWow! This was so cool! So original! I really really liked this story! But I wish it was longer!
Captain Blackbird
2004-10-02
ch 1,
abuseWow, this reminds me of the Secret of Roan Irish - they had some kind of legend with seals and skin, I can't remember now. But this is short and sweet!
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