really good story

You killed Hedwig didn't you. *goes off and cries in a corner for awhile*
Man, the past ten stories I've read have all killed her. Anyway, great story so far. Fraught with drama and the like. I'm enjoying it immensely... except for the dead Hedwig bit... but I think I need to move on now. Cheers.

OH GOHD NO! HEDWIG!
Ahem... very good, excuse this short review. I have to continue on and see if you really did kill Hedwig... please no.

I enjoyed reading this story, I wish it continued rather then just stop. Well done!

I wasn't shocked with Dumbledore; he was right in what he did. Harry's the one acting like a complete idiot!

This chapter was not as good as the rest. Kind of, badly written angst...

i think this fic has given me nightmares! i had the strangest dream last night resembling the first chapter. it was very real. the chapter i mean.

That was really enjoyable. Thanks

Heyy, I learned a new word: phlegmatic

Very sweet ending.
You do have some formatting problems, though.

The rug - very clever!

Oh no, poor Ron and Ginny!

I love Poe in the black tea towel - very Snapish!
An the anti-theft statue was hilarious!

"He wasn't the type to believe in ghosts but he had heard plenty of creepy stories over the years. Stories that always seemed to start with "It was a dark and stormy night…""
Great line!
And I absolutely LOVE the idea that Snape has an annoying mother he wishes to avoid.

Great start!

Hi. I only just found this story and I loved it.

it was really well written and believable. Not always achievable in a short story like that well done.
Maria

cool story i loved it. when will there be a sequal