Perfect! Perfect and sweet and tender and heart wrenching and so full of emotion, you practically had me crying! Beautiful story, really! If only this would happen...I would love it! You really do write brilliantly, and so descriptively...it's amazing! I love the whole thing...but I think my favorite line was...:

"She can feel his breath on the back of her neck as she unlocks her front door, comforting and exhilarating and so achingly familiar, too much for her senses and her heart. Much too much for her heart."

That line somehow perfectly set the tone of the story for me, wrapped up so much emotion and feeling into it...well done! Really brilliant:)

Wow! That was very beautifully written, I really enjoyed it ;).

Thanks to CO for finding your story and bring it to the J/S archive! Beautiful work and I hope you will focus on all the positive feedback (totally airing off the one nasty comment) and delight us with more of your literary art.

Aw! It's so sweet!! I love it!

~S

Okay, I realise I'm a little late to the party with this review and I hope you're still active on ! Just wanted to let you know I've really enjoyed both your WAT fics. I've just set up a C2 community in the WAT section for JS fics and would love to include your 2 stories if that's okay with you?! If so, drop me an email and I'll put you in. Cheers, C.O.

Aw

I loved this story, very emotional. Keep on writing & post another story soon. xx

Samantha's sure slutty in this story. I hope it doesn't turn out that way on the show. Hey, maybe she ought to move on to Danny next. Might as well cover all the bases. And then she could try going bi, take up with the only other female on the team. She's trashy enough to do it now.

Wow, this was really good! Emotional and honest and sweet. Please keep writing!

Aw, that was so beautifully hearfelt, darling. I believed every word said and every emotion expressed. Totally gave me hope for J/S in the future. I loved it.

Oh my... *tear, tear*

How to describe an amazing fic like that... The words just flew from my mind. But it was awesomely amazing. I do know that. With your description and the character's personalities down, it was amazing.

I hope you'll keep writing. ^^

Wow! This is great...write more...what's going to happen to Martin...and is he going to tell her he's getting divorced? Write more!

Aww, that was wonderful!
I can really imagine that happening on the show! In fact, that's exactly what I picture to happen. You know, Sam and Jack are not yet off the table :D
You're a great writer, keep it up.
x Sunny (Shoegal from fanforum)

This is such a wonderful story - their emotions seem so real and you *know* you're one of my favourite writers :D E, please write more :)