Great story!

aw, i wish that this had happened instead. i lovw the format that you have it set in, and how its all a dream, but so real. i hated that episode, i thought it completely degraded the character of tyr and the writers should be ashamed at how they had a major character who played a pivotal role and meant so much to the other crew members leave the show. so it makes me happy when people write things to contradict them! )

this is truly beautiful.

I love your writing style and the way you explain what's going on. Very creative, and original.

So powerful yet devastating...

Great piece of fiction

Kudos!

Christina