Thumbelina is one of my favorite non-Disney animated musical movies and your rendition the characters is interesting. I never really imagined there being a sequel, but come to think of it, a lot of that characters that populated the world did not get clear endings as Thumbelina simply left them behind. So kudos, haven't read the whole story yet, but its on my list. I like your descriptions of the bumblebee.

Bravo! An excellent story indeed. You have a certain gift at writing. I agree with another reviewer who thinks that this has a potential to be a good sequel to the movie. I enjoyed this wholeheartedly.

Fly with me and I will be your wings ,

xJadeRainx

Oh, poor Thumbelina. Sure she saved the day, but I'm sure it broke her sweet little heart. I hope they can find the other fairies now.

We'll see the universe, and dance on Saturn's rings

xJadeRainx

I can't wait until the gang reach the mountains of the Kobolds. It is bound to be an exciting match! I hope Cornelius and Thumbelina can save their people in time. I love Jacquimo and Grundel. They are so cute! And Cecil is one smart little bat. Reading this makes me want to see the movie again.

Let me be your wings,
Leave behind the world you know,
For another world of wondrous things,

xJadeRainx

I'm so happy that Grundel didn't die! After all, he did save Thumbelina from drowning. Now, they can all be friends. Cornelius can even start an alliance with the Nixies for his people. What a great prince!

Everyday I'll take you higher, and I'll never let you fall,

xJadeRainx

This was an exciting chapter. Those Nixies sure weren't friendly, and their chief was just awful! I, I do hope the Nixies didn't get their hands on Thumbelina. Cornelius had only just found her.

Anything that you desire,anything at all

xJadeRainx

Oh, how exciting! I do hope that Cornelius and Thumbelina meet up at the pool of the Nixies. Won't his tiny wife be surprised when she finds him with the dreadful toad that once upon a time tried to force her into marriage?

Everything we're dreaming of will soon be ours,

xJadeRainx

Ah yes, I remember that awful beetle. Back to cause trouble, no doubt. I'm anxious to see how this story unfolds. Wonderful writing, my dear.

Let me be your wings. Let me lift you high above,

xJadeRainx

what a crazy chapter! Anything that could go wrong, did go wrong. What will Cor do next? Will Grundel follow? I kind of like the two of them together.

Anyway, I wonder if you have ever read Hans Christian Andersen's Version of Thumbelina. It's almost exactly like the movies, which is funny, becasue he is also the author of the little mermaid, and that is completely different from the movie.

Let me take you far beyond the stars,

xJadeRainx

Loving this story right now. This is probably the best written fanfiction I have ever come across. You certainly have talent! Grundel and Cornelius? What an unusual friendship!

I have one question:

"It was a painting of many different Fey, all gamboling together."

This wouldn't happen to be a reference to Dogs Playing Poker by C. M. Coolidge, would it?

Let me be your only love,

xJadeRainx

Wow, you are a really good writer. Better than me, that's for sure. I really enjoyed this chapter, and I can't wait to read more. Cor may indeed be angry with the toad, but when push comes to shove, Grundel is right. They have wasted quite a bit of precious time.

Let me be your wings,

xJadeRainx

Wow this was a great story!

I have literally spent most of my night reading it!
I love how you were able to explore the characters without straying from their original personalities. Really cool!

WOW.

this is an amazing read. i couldnt stop!

please please please submit this to Don bluth studios!!

I would have liked Cor and Lina to have had a 'couple' moment at the end, but oh well.

very well written

thankyou, its made my day.

X

Wow, this story is amazing. I am a big fan of Thumbelina, I love the songs. Why don't you write some songs to go with the story? If you write as good as this then the songs should be fantastic!

I have been waiting forever for you to finish this story! I absolutely love Thumbelina and I loved your story!! This should definitely be in a movie form!! They need a sequel to Thumbelina! It was awesome!!