 Trisana Tenebrae 2009-09-18 . chapter 5I love this story and I hope you can update it soon since its really different.
((and if you can't tell I am reading ALL of your stories!)) |
 Oracle1208@hotmail.com 2009-09-15 . chapter 1 I really like it so far. The characters keep your attention and make you want to know what comes next. I've only gotten to chapter three though due to the fact that I realized it wasn't finish. I understand that alot of people get tired of writing fanfiction and just end up stopping, but if you ever think of writing more of this, just know there is a reader that will be very happy to read it. Thanks for writing what you did. |
 cutebutpsychogirl 2009-07-04 . chapter 5i hope you continue to update this story. it is an awesome story and very different from the rest which is why i like is so much. :) |
 ImmortalSoull 2009-05-12 . chapter 5i am a fan of this story =] I hope Inuyasha comes to know about the bomb (?) in his bathroom |
 pooguy 2008-11-26 . chapter 5i am pretty sure its the sea of china, not the china sea |
 dangitsesshomaru 2008-10-07 . chapter 5o |
 agent007 2008-09-08 . chapter 5 im really enjoying this fanfiction and i would really like to read more of it so if you had the time and could update this is I would really really (like totally not exaggerating)really appreciate it ty! :) |
 Relena Peace 2008-07-29 . chapter 5That spanking the monkey comment has me laughing my ARSE off! HAH!
Anywho...you've abandonded this story! ::tear:: I would love it if you picked it up again! ::puppy dog eyes:: Pretty please!
::huggles::
~Relena Peace |
 mcookiy 2008-03-31 . chapter 5Pretty good story update soon! |
 licia 2008-02-26 . chapter 5 Ha! So I realise it's a bit late, and that you've most likely lost all interest, but it'd be brilliant if you kept going with this! Your stuff always makes me laugh. I used to read it when you were still updating and I sort of just remembered you the other day and came by to see what was shaking. The stories are still as great as they were the first time round!
cheers!
alicia |
 brakken 2008-02-10 . chapter 5Oh, now I'm just itching to find out was in that cupboard mentioned earlier...because whatever it is, he's probably using it right now or at least looking at it or whatever you do with it...Nice little sidetrack you've got going here, isn't it? And I'm still unconvinced about Inuyasha not being Ori. To be honest, I think he is, if only for the simple reason that if I were the author I would make them the same person. Lame I know, but I haven't really got much else to go on here. I happen to be enjoying this story immensely- I'd forgotten how fond I am of pirates- and you have no idea of the delight you'd inspire if you could maybe write more chapters? please? You don't have to if you don't want to, but it really would be lovely, and I know I would appreciate it ever so much. It's a really fun story, and with so many plot threads tangled up, it's practically impossible to predict what would happen next. I could try finishing it off for myself in my head, but it really wouldn't be the same. Oh well. Update if you can, but if not, know that this little bit gave me pleasure at the very least. |
 brakken 2008-02-10 . chapter 4Hehehehe I can just imagine Inuyasha sleeping on a heart shaped bed...Naraku probably did get it from some pimp, or maybe just honeymooners, although with a name like that for a vessel I'd vote pimp first...Quite amusing actually...And I'm personally still debating (given Inuyasha's obvious lack of memory) if he isn't really Ori after all- all the habits they have in common are leading me in that direction personally. Nice job with their dialog too, and keeping her properly wary of him while still fed up with his arrogance. |
 brakken 2008-02-10 . chapter 3Can't wait to see how they manage to start liking each other, let alone fall in love...the cactus is a nice touch, it sends the message that he's not the stereotypical raping pillaging violent demon that he appears to be, while still allowing Kagome to not think of him better in any conscious way- only to doubt her first impression. But doubt can be the mother of a change in opinion...a rather drastic change at times...Hehehe can't wait to see where this all ends up. |
 brakken 2008-02-10 . chapter 2Hm seems to be some difference in the memories here...Naraku's doing is my guess, he seems to be rather fond of messing with people, even unnecessarily. Nice job with the semi-recognition, and her own reaction-and all the little tidbits regarding those painful memories are quite delightful, I have to admit. I'm having quite a merry time tweaking and prodding the hints and teases to try and puzzle out the plot. Can't wait to find out more! |
 brakken 2008-02-10 . chapter 1Interesting...Ori, huh? An old childhood friend perhaps? One with one serious case of amnesia, (assuming he didn't purposefully forget because the memories were painful ones) to the extent that he'd forgotten his own birthday, his own age? Possibly even his own name? This is proving to be very interesting. Intriguing even. I'll keep reading... |