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mcookiy 2008-03-31 ch 5,	abusePretty good story update soon!
licia 2008-02-26 ch 5, anon.	abuseHa! So I realise it's a bit late, and that you've most likely lost all interest, but it'd be brilliant if you kept going with this! Your stuff always makes me laugh. I used to read it when you were still updating and I sort of just remembered you the other day and came by to see what was shaking. The stories are still as great as they were the first time round! cheers! alicia
brakken 2008-02-10 ch 5,	abuseOh, now I'm just itching to find out was in that cupboard mentioned earlier...because whatever it is, he's probably using it right now or at least looking at it or whatever you do with it...Nice little sidetrack you've got going here, isn't it? And I'm still unconvinced about Inuyasha not being Ori. To be honest, I think he is, if only for the simple reason that if I were the author I would make them the same person. Lame I know, but I haven't really got much else to go on here. I happen to be enjoying this story immensely- I'd forgotten how fond I am of pirates- and you have no idea of the delight you'd inspire if you could maybe write more chapters? please? You don't have to if you don't want to, but it really would be lovely, and I know I would appreciate it ever so much. It's a really fun story, and with so many plot threads tangled up, it's practically impossible to predict what would happen next. I could try finishing it off for myself in my head, but it really wouldn't be the same. Oh well. Update if you can, but if not, know that this little bit gave me pleasure at the very least.
brakken 2008-02-10 ch 4,	abuseHehehehe I can just imagine Inuyasha sleeping on a heart shaped bed...Naraku probably did get it from some pimp, or maybe just honeymooners, although with a name like that for a vessel I'd vote pimp first...Quite amusing actually...And I'm personally still debating (given Inuyasha's obvious lack of memory) if he isn't really Ori after all- all the habits they have in common are leading me in that direction personally. Nice job with their dialog too, and keeping her properly wary of him while still fed up with his arrogance.
brakken 2008-02-10 ch 3,	abuseCan't wait to see how they manage to start liking each other, let alone fall in love...the cactus is a nice touch, it sends the message that he's not the stereotypical raping pillaging violent demon that he appears to be, while still allowing Kagome to not think of him better in any conscious way- only to doubt her first impression. But doubt can be the mother of a change in opinion...a rather drastic change at times...Hehehe can't wait to see where this all ends up.
brakken 2008-02-10 ch 2,	abuseHm seems to be some difference in the memories here...Naraku's doing is my guess, he seems to be rather fond of messing with people, even unnecessarily. Nice job with the semi-recognition, and her own reaction-and all the little tidbits regarding those painful memories are quite delightful, I have to admit. I'm having quite a merry time tweaking and prodding the hints and teases to try and puzzle out the plot. Can't wait to find out more!
brakken 2008-02-10 ch 1,	abuseInteresting...Ori, huh? An old childhood friend perhaps? One with one serious case of amnesia, (assuming he didn't purposefully forget because the memories were painful ones) to the extent that he'd forgotten his own birthday, his own age? Possibly even his own name? This is proving to be very interesting. Intriguing even. I'll keep reading...
solarecilpse 2008-01-25 ch 5,	abuseI've noticed that you haven't updated this story for about FOUR years now. It's really interesting and enjoyable to read and I would LOVE, simple Love, for you to continue and update. So I encourage you and pray for you to continue...PLEASE. Your loyal and waitng reader.
MadamCalculator 2007-12-18 ch 3,	abuseWhere did you get the name Ori, whaere?
Moonlit January 2007-08-29 ch 5,	abusePlease update, it's real good and I'm anxious to see what happens!
Pirate-With-Sea-Blue-Eyes 2007-08-19 ch 5, anon.	abuseyay! i love this story! are you going to continue it?please gives puppy dog eyes anyway i love it it was really good ciao ciao Janine
brown-is-warm 2007-08-07 ch 5,	abuseLmao Oh man, I loved the end of this chapter. I can see all of this going somewhere, you should update it. It's my fave of all your work, next to Zero-G and Dead Famous, of course ;) You write magnificently, Keep it up.
FantomoDrako 2007-08-05 ch 5,	abuseHopefully? Oh, please don't stop! I'm loving this story, it's got me hooked! Uh...pun not intended there... Please, please tell me you'll update?
Akairyou 2007-06-27 ch 5,	abuseum plz update! ur stories rock! ^o^
Emmi-chan 2007-04-17 ch 5,	abuseSucks to be a hostage. I hope you haven't given up on this one :)

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