i loved this story!! it was very well constructed... it was the first FF that made me think about the meaning!! good work!!

i love it.
down to the melting of the snow and the discoveries made[:

love it ^^

I don't think you need any criticism at all, I love it and I beleive I understand all of it... even if I don't I don't care cause it works for me and it's a great story.
D&S

Stories like this one are rare; people like to rush into them. In my personal opinion what makes an HPDM story good is the wait...
Keep Writing.

Aw, I like it. I like how they didn't snog as soon as they realized that they cared for each other. I like how it wasn't a startling revelation, or a revelation at all.
The symbols were understood, even without you pointing them out at the end, though that may have just been a result of my English teacher, who is really, really big on symbols and theme and all those lovely things.
It's a nice, subtle story, standing alone amidst a mess of angst-filled, humourous fics without a shred of reality. Just what I needed! Many thanks, dahling!

hm...very interesting, lotsa symbolism

Once again I LOVED it. In fact, it's becoming a habit of mine to love everything you write. It's almost scary, but refreshing nonetheless. This fic desrves an award. Since I can't really give you one though, I guess you'll have to settle for this going on my favorite stories list. ^_^

-:-loonyluna9-:-

Wonderful

I really liked this. The setting for each little segment was beautifully described and it isn't often that you find a writer who makes the slash so subtle yet obvious if you know what I mean. Gorgeous fic sweetheart.

Kisses,
Aurora.

I was all "aww"ish for about 5 seconds before I saw that you wrote that right after we saw Napoleon. I cracked up. This story reminds me a lot of that movie we wanted to see...The Kiss the melted the snow. We still have to see that! but i love this story! it's so sweet and...*handmotion* hehe.

This really verged on amazing. I read it again after the a/n and wowza, it meant a lot more to me. really great one shot. you shouldn't continue it though, it stands better on its own. id be very interested in reading something else you've written though, you're fantastic.

way, are you continuing?

I have never really cared much for slash. How extreme some of them go (yet the same still for het) annoys me. You don't have to have sex always on the mind - or close to it - for the story to be good. And so I have found this one quite sweet. The closing is what catches you and makes you smile. Bravo.

That was really good! I loved it-all of it was kind of vague--you don't know much about what else is going on in the school or in thier lives but it makes the parts that we do see a lot sweeter. Very, very good.