this seems like a cute story! i cant wait to read the next chapie!

I got a positive review for you...I LOVE THIS!
PLEASE,PLEASE UDATE SOON! MUST READ MORE...
MUST CLICK TO GET TO NEXT CHAPTER. NO! IT'S NOT THERE!! UDATE PLEASE...!

Elora Nova

*wheezes* I'm sorry, I just can't stop laughing!

This is great
please continue!

This is a text book example of a Mary Sue...(Sueios Annoyingios)

First off...ask yourself “Doses it add to the plot if I say how much she weighs?

I see that you have got a lot of negative reviews for this story, and although I agree with most of what is said I regret that people are so agressive about it. I hope that you don't take it all too personally, and that you let it help you as a writer rather than have it put you off permanently.

You clearly have imagination, and are good at writing in the structural sense. But like any talent it must be trained and practised before you'll get really good.

Read a lot, write when you can, and don't let people get you down.

*lobs flaming ball of napalm at the Mary Sue*

*runs away, tittering, into the night*

Dear Eru. This is a torog, right? Please be a torog.

Blatant Mary-Sueism? Check.
Even more blatant self-insert? Check. (When the author actually admits it...*shakes head sadly*)
Dumb nickname for Legolas? Check. (Leggy-chan? What the?)
Legomance? Check. (Soul mates? *dies laughing*)
Sue inexplicably ends up in Middle Earth? Check.
Sue is accepted by canon characters almost instantly and joins the Fellowship? Check. (Never mind that it's *nine*, and nine only, members for a good reason, which has already been pointed out in other reviews.)

Let's see...pretty much the only fangirl cliché you left out is turning Boromir into a stupid, chauvinistic pig, but it looks like you're probably heading in that direction.

Tenth walker/drop dead gorgeous Sue/Legomance story number 8378226347458262...doesn't anyone have a shred of originality anymore?

I'm sorry if this seems harsh, but frankly, I am so sick of seeing these stories pop up every five seconds, each practically identical. It's an insult to Tolkien's work.

Holding your story "hostage" until you get so many positive reviews is silly. Write because you like it, not to become popular among strangers on the internet.

Also, if you are going to add a tenth member to the Fellowship (which is rather overdone), you might want to bear in mind that your average teenage girl might not be physically fit for the rigors of the trek - let alone the battles. Eowyn could fight, but she was trained to it. How will your character deal with the hardships the Fellowship faces?

I appriciate your using a spellcheck, though.

Well, since everyone and their brother has pointed out that she's a godawful Mary Sue, I think I'll address something that seems to have been for the most part overlooked: her/your weight.
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"She was 5'7 and 105 lbs." Um, unless you're on some other planet where 105 lbs. is normal for a person of that height, it's safe to say she has an eating disorder. Contrary to popular belief, weighing around 100 lbs is not healthy for everyone. In fact, it pretty much stops being healthy for a small-framed girl after 5'2.
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According to this description, your character is a walking skeleten. It's hard to look "luscious" when people can use your rib cage as a xylophone.
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That said, I really hope that this "quality" is just like almost every other aspect of your character: an unnecessary exaggeration. I saw on your bio page that you claim to really be 5'7 and 105. That worries me. This is NOT a healthy weight for someone with your gender and height. I suggest you see a doctor and SOON.
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You're spelling and grammar are very good, but there are a few things I would recommend. Keep in mind, though, that these are only suggestions. This is your story, so the decision to change or create things belongs to you.

1. There is nothing wrong with being beautiful. The only thing I would personally change would be the descriptions, such as "milky" complection, and "luscious lashes." While these are good descriptions, they can make your character sound conceited. You could always have some dialogue, such as, "Blah, blah, blah," the girl said, downcasting her bright, blue eyes. Maybe something like that.

2. I don't think any of the Fellowship members would quickly accept another person into their group, since the very existance of their world would hang in the balance of what they set out to do. A stranger, someone they have no knowledge of, could destroy their mission, and then, they'd all be as good as dead.

These are just a few suggestions, not demands. If you want to keep your story the way it is, that's fine.

Thou art a Torog! Begone!

to quote a very famous fanfic author by the name of Camilla Sandman, "You shall count to nine, nine is the number of your counting. You shall not count to ten, nor to eleven. Nine is the number of the Fellowship."
you should read the offical fanfictions university of middle-earth and save readers the pain of mary sues

ok...i'm not trying to flame you here...but...

1. Leggy-chan...um...it doesn't really work...cuz Legolas is not Japanese, nor is LOTR japanese...
2."She was 5'7", 105 lbs, had long beautiful blonde hair, clear blue eyes surrounded by gorgeous lashes, a milk white complexion and luscious pink lips." Your overdoing that 'beuty' of her.
3. "she and Legolas were soul mates" yesyes, we all understand she's off in her own world...but...souldmate?! God. Legolas is a fictional character...
4."Legolas: I lurv you Sienna. SNOGS "
wtf?! definatly something wrong here.
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and finally, the BIGGEST mistake EVER.
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5."I own Sienna of course, because she is me, LOL." THAT bugged me the most.
We all know your NOT ugly, but please, if you want to write a story with your name in it, PLEASE, don't tell that to the readers! it makes us think your some gay wannabe person, off in some stupid fantasy.
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Don't take me wrong! i love LOTR, and legolas/oc stories as much as you do, i like Mary-Sues, but this, is overdoing it.
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i REALLy hope that my comments don't discourage you, but instead, try using them as a guidline...
i like how she can like, tell the future an all that crap, i don't mind if theres a tenth capanion! so, just, try and re-do this story! i'm quite sure you'll end up with WAY better results!

I'm thinking it's a troll...