|Reviews for My Little Secret|
| steelneil 11/22/11 . chapter 14
AWWW COME ON UPDATE ALREADY...
Seriously i've read it like infinite times already, bloody 4 years and nothing still,makes me wonder if you are alive or no...
Well forgoing my impatience, i would like to say that your fic has by far the best character depth among all the Ranma fics I've come across. However there is a nagging doubt at some corner of my brain that says , you are being unfair to the Saotome's...
I mean come on, I see Nabiki reminiscing about her past, breaking her Ice-Barrier and all,
Kasumi delving in her thoughts becoming more motherly, and showing more realistic emotions like guilt, etc(i really like that), Akane doesn't introspect much yet she is shown to be caring and a bit understanding and Soun trying to undo his mistakes.
Whereas I've not seen Ranma or Genma think back, at anytime. I mean if you consider their situation, Ranma may have had the toughest life of all, if not the most then maybe on par with the Tendos.
Leaving his mom and civilization to train at the whims of his father, he may have yearned for love like that of a normal family and when he finally finds his yearning quenched among the Tendos, the present emotional turmoil between him and the sisters, further making him feel lonely. Definitely, you have showed Ranma's features and his introspection into his present feelings for Nabiki, but I still feel that his complete thought process is not revealed.
And surely Genma must feel something, remorse maybe for the Necko-Ken or about their journey which ate into Ranma's childhood,etc. He can have a father-son tête à tête with Ranma or something similar, signifying their character depth.
I am not ranting though, who knows you may have actually planned all that, and maybe not cocentrating on Saotomes helps emphasize on the Tendos. Either way "PLEASE" update soon...
| Collin Oshea 9/19/11 . chapter 14
Great chapter, keep up the good work.
| Sonic Wooten 8/28/11 . chapter 14
Very Interesting Story, I like the depth of the Main Characters lives and am very much looking forward to where this story goes. Thank you for writing such a good story!
| Hammerchuckery 5/16/11 . chapter 3
Hilarious, but I just need to ignore the Engrish.
| Meech Macko 4/12/11 . chapter 14
Dude are you ever going to update this one decent Ran/nabiki its a great fic i gotta tell ya and i know you aint good with fight scenes but since Ranma defeated Saffron(Demigod) he has gotta be the most damn powerful martial artist ...right?
| feernando 1/20/11 . chapter 14
i really liked this chapter it was really good all that emotion i think that you should continue this because it really good
| feernando 1/19/11 . chapter 13
wow this chapter was really good
| feernando 1/19/11 . chapter 11
the whole story was good but this chapter was amazing
| feernando 1/18/11 . chapter 1
it was good
| griffenvamp 10/12/10 . chapter 14
pl update please want to see how this truns out
| Skydragonkitten 8/25/10 . chapter 14
i want to know what happens this is a good story... Please come back to it.
| griffenvamp 8/9/10 . chapter 14
| rosstock 7/29/10 . chapter 14
I love your story. XD
| No Name 5/29/10 . chapter 14
This is a great Ranma and Nabiki story. I can pratically feel the feelings they have for each other. It has been so long since you updated, so could you please add more chapters.
| Noyesno 2/15/10 . chapter 14