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| BlackHalliwell 2006-08-13 ch 2, | abuseI loved this story! let me know when the sequel comes out! |
| dark angel 2004-12-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou have a good story and a good plot. The numerous grammar mistakes take away from it and make it harder to read and enjoy. Try finding someone to check your grammar and use some type of grammar check on your computer (WORD has one). Keep writing. YOu seem to enjoy it alot. |
| Christiangirl 2004-10-04 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, Nicol. I really enjoyed it. I think the plot was well-written. Keep up the great work. Sharon |