I like it! It is a new and unique perspective to his mental turmoil. I hadn't thought to look at it like that before. well done! Keep writing!

A very mature one-shot. Clears up Inuyasha thoughts very nicely.

Another job well done.

Ja ne,

Izayoi

the writing style was very mature and i liked that a lot. theres only so many times you can read ill written fics, you know? but the whole tone, so serious and contemplative, was very un-inuyasha. i'm not saying thats a bad thing since i highly doubt that he's as immature as he's ususally presented. i just thought you should be aware

Wow, This was Amazing!