Excellent stuff. I just last week learned of this character and he has quickly become one of my favorites as well. I love the way the writing seems like an actual stream of thought and the way it becomes more psycotic and disjointed is very impressive work.

Wow. So... okay. i recognized the quote at the beginning and immediately knew who it was referring to, but for some reason it took me a while to realize that this was his origin story.

The imagery was awesome. VERY impressive. You followed his thought pattern - scattered and yet focused at the same time - very well. i kind of got lost between the suicide and the murder sections, but in all, it was a very vivid look into Zsasz's mind. This is the first thing I've read in the Batman fandom in more than a year - trying to decide if it's worth it to take my OWN writing in this direction - and my faith is renewed. :) Thank you!