Quite frankly, the last few chapters kinda made me sick.
But that just to be expected.
It's a great piece of writing, keep it up.

And bad and evil things must happen to Gendo, things involving blowtorches and razors.

until chapter five, I thought this was a WAFF fic with no real direction. when I read chapter five... this became a whole lot darker and more dramatic. it better have a happy ending and Gendo had better PAY. and PAY and PAY and PAY. S/A fan, for the record

Whoa... I knew Gendo was The Bastard King... but this is just... wow

You've really got my attention with this fic, awaiting next chapter eagerly

interesting idea in regards to how gendo rapes asuka, and believable considering how he treats ritsuko. so is shinji gonna have trouble cause it was his father? just a thought...

interesting...this story just made a 180 turn to some serious dark stuff...

First thank you for adding the author comments as some authors as you have pointed out take sexual assault very lightly.
Also I simply suggest maybe not being as graphic.
An example follows;
"Go ahead," Commander Ikari purred, his hand running swiftly down the buttons of her shirt.

(Simply delate this section.)

Asuka put her head in her hands as she cried, staring blankly at the wall across from her. Her clothes lay ripped up and thrown in the corner. There was pain deep inside of her and she gasped for breath. Tears trickled down her splotchy red face. She couldn't believe this had happened to her. Why?

This still tells the reader exactly what happened but without such a graphic accounting of the act.
You make your point without provoking anyone this way.

Thanks for listening and I cannot wait to see What Rei and Asuka will eventually DO to Gendo Ikair.

Actually What Shinji will do to him if HE finds out while still IN Unit-01.

Thanks for understanding.

dennisud2015

I must admit with that other reviewer that yes, this chapter DID ** up the mood of your story. True it was unexpected and came out of nowhere, and the secret alliance thing with Rei and Asuka was pretty, wonder where it will lead? The only thing is, and I should have said this when I reviewed Red Tears, but I think Gendo is smarter than that, he's a good actor, hence Rei respecting him so much, he only acts on intimidation when he needs to. Well, maybe not only when he needs to, cough Ritsuko cough, but still she consented to that while raping one of his soldiers still wouldn't be the smartest to do given his high position, it still doesn't take away from the drama of this story. please update soon.

Wow. This last chapter totaly ** the mood of your story.

hmm.. Well from what ive read i can sat«y that i like the story. However, the use of the sexual abuse is just sick, disgusting and useless. Like dennisud2015 said, there are some of us who actualy KNOW what its like to have a loved one go trough that and i must tell you, its ruining your whole fanfic.

Good Day.

Sorry I went off in my previous review but when you have someone close to you have that happen it can get to you.
I will try to keep an open mind as you have Asuka... and Rei deal with this and how they will deal with Gendo as well as anyone else he had abused.
I think a sex scandal would bring down even one such as Commander Ikari.

Just a thought.

dennisud2015

Seems Seamok has created a literal avalanche with the raping of Rei, Asuka, Hikiar or any of the other women by Gendo or some no nname ACC. I like this story but I think the use of sexual abuse is simply distasteful.

As for the girls allying themselves against gendo, there are many ways they would the main one being the treatment of Shinji and what Gendo could have done...or not done during the battles with the angels. Maybe allowing a group of thugs to beat him to an inch of his life might have as strong an effect as what had happened to Asuka and it seems Rei.

Again I like the story and the implications of Shinji eventuall;y going to the rescue of Rei and Asuka in some future chapter. but the use of Abuse should be sparringly and with a clear intent.

Sorry but I have someone close be a victim of abuse so You can understand why.

dennisud2015

Cute, though the prose could use some cleaning up.

I would think that a drunk Rei is very out of character, though.

A drunk Rei and Romance, I love it! Keep it up.

This reminds me when LCL was used with beer.

This...is not the same...please god no not the same.

Yes! (that's an incoherent good job)

Interesting chapter But I think that The way Rei racted was a bit too OOC.
Maybe a smile and a glzed look would have been better but hey it's your story.

dennisud