This just keeps on getting more and more...twisted, for lack of a better word. I mean that in a good way, but talk about your plot twists! Those last five paragraphs/lines were totally deep. My thoughts on the previous review have just been dumped on! More soon, please!

Oh my! What is happening?

3 That's me for you; anyway, keep up the awesome work as always. And just for the record, I didn't find it that long for you to update!

This Is a very exciting story as I have just found it while looking for Ninetails stories. I cannot wait for the story to continue!

This is turning into one hell of a story. I can't wait to reed the next chp. You have a weird way of making names, for example, Allekendro. I can hardly prounce it.

hey this is even better. but i must say wouldn't, if a pokeball gets too hot would let out the pokemon before it is destroyed? i mean they are built to keep the pokemon alive not keep it in and let it melt down. anyway another question. hiw is it now that jeremy is back at the island how will Katherine talk to the ninetails? also your pokeball theory was... well intersting. in fact you are the first one to touch on why do pokeballs work? Keep it up and i am enjoying this story greatly.

How dastardly! But was it Sasoliar or Grottlis? I'm betting on Grottlis. He seems like one of those untrustworthy advisors to ignorant (and I don't mean that they are mean or rude, just ignorant of their situations)rulers. Excellent chapter!

Oh...so she killed them? That's dispicable!Man...I hope Jeremy will be alright. Can't wait for the next chapter! HURRY!

PNEK MEKS

Oh... Suspense-ish! I'm liking this story more and more with every chapter! D Keep updating, and keep up the awesome work!

DO continue...I sense we are drawing to a peak in the plot...

Very good and i must voice the same question that others have ask are you really a newibe? because this is very good and now that last sentence and i quote "the truth..." it gives me something that is like everything before this was not the real reason that their is something even more that is about to be uncovered but i can't wait till you post agian i love reading this story

Pokemon rules! Great storie! Please make more your idea is way better then i throught please make more! The best i ever seen! I wonder what happens next? Well see ya!

I love it! It's so creepy! And I just love the gengar! Oh...and your theory...which I struggled to understand...was very good, and I have yet to discover a flaw...but give me awhile...I'm good at finding flaws in everything...unless you have discovered the one thing I can't find a flaw in...then I might have to say that there is no flaw...which there isn't...so I won't even try. I await your next chapter!

PNEK MEKS

Man, Pokemon stories keep getting better and better.

This is one of the best ones i've read. Keep this up and please update shortly, this is very, very interesting.

Your endings are really cool. They leave so many questions to the reader. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!

PNEK MEKS

Oh dear, oh dear...I hope...no, I won't say, but I hope Sasoliar isn't as bad as all THAT...o.o