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charliebrown1234
2009-11-24 . chapter 16
(coughs quietly in hand) Hello? It's been five monthes. I'm all caught up and ready for my update now. Please? Author? Come out of your hole? Please please please with a cherry on top? Oh well, worth a shot. Anywho, love the story. Found it on a friends favorite list. Thanks for writing this much!
Kari
2009-11-21 . chapter 16
Now, I dunno why the heck the previous reviewer, Kazekira, said what they did. This story is brilliant! I love it a lot. The only thing I have to say is that you shouldn't be so hard on yourself with mistakes. Everyone makes them.

Can't wait to read more!
Kazekira
2009-10-28 . chapter 4
Another sad excuse of a writer trying to seem like they know about suffering by completely dousing a story with angst making it utterly putrid to even read.
Curtis Zidane Ziraa
2009-10-26 . chapter 16
So cool! I really like this. Keep going!
Hollow Mashiro
2009-10-24 . chapter 16
This is GREAT! I love this time travel fic!! Ooh, I wonder what all the Jedi's reactions back at the Temple will be to Obi-Wan... I wonder how the Council will react? Update soon please!

-HM
xfighter4
2009-10-12 . chapter 16
Great story! Pls update soon.
FalseReflections
2009-10-03 . chapter 16
update!
MadnessLover
2009-09-03 . chapter 16
Great story.
chrin2009
2009-08-24 . chapter 16
I can't wawit for the next chapter. It was getting so good at the end and you just stop. Hope you update as soon as you have the time.
Mortimier
2009-08-18 . chapter 1
this story was pretty fantastic in the beginning. Well written and believable. However somewhere in the middle it lost the spark so to say. When you started inventing your own stuff too much it went a tad down hill. At times it is confusing and a bit complex read. Fever switches between point of view and less angst wouldn't hurt either. Also with story premise like this I think the most interesting thing would be to read how he would affect/change the future most of us know from the movies and time he comes from not an obscure EU novel that most people haven't even heard of...

Still a nice story
Gentle Kit
2009-08-17 . chapter 16
Quite a good fic. I've enjoyed reading it and can't wait for more. :)
Tashilover
2009-08-16 . chapter 3
I spend nearly two hours a day commuting to get to my college. To pass the time, I printed out your fic and read it over and over again during those two hours. Because I've read it so much, I stopped reading this fic during the duration of the summer. And here I am, rereading it again, and it still has the power to send little butterflies to my stomach. He!
Daniella Harwood
2009-08-06 . chapter 16
I have just read this story through for the first time today, and I found myself thinking that this is one of the best time travel stories I have read at . I'm eagerly awaiting the next post, and wondering how this will continue.

Daniella
starberries bite
2009-07-31 . chapter 8
oh my 8 chapters in and am hooked. great fic
starberries bite
2009-07-31 . chapter 3
I'm enjoying your story, it's got a different kinda shape to it.
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