Another sad excuse of a writer trying to seem like they know about suffering by completely dousing a story with angst making it utterly putrid to even read.

So cool! I really like this. Keep going!

This is GREAT! I love this time travel fic!! Ooh, I wonder what all the Jedi's reactions back at the Temple will be to Obi-Wan... I wonder how the Council will react? Update soon please!

-HM

Great story! Pls update soon.

update!

Great story.

I can't wawit for the next chapter. It was getting so good at the end and you just stop. Hope you update as soon as you have the time.

this story was pretty fantastic in the beginning. Well written and believable. However somewhere in the middle it lost the spark so to say. When you started inventing your own stuff too much it went a tad down hill. At times it is confusing and a bit complex read. Fever switches between point of view and less angst wouldn't hurt either. Also with story premise like this I think the most interesting thing would be to read how he would affect/change the future most of us know from the movies and time he comes from not an obscure EU novel that most people haven't even heard of...

Still a nice story

Quite a good fic. I've enjoyed reading it and can't wait for more. :)

I spend nearly two hours a day commuting to get to my college. To pass the time, I printed out your fic and read it over and over again during those two hours. Because I've read it so much, I stopped reading this fic during the duration of the summer. And here I am, rereading it again, and it still has the power to send little butterflies to my stomach. He!

I have just read this story through for the first time today, and I found myself thinking that this is one of the best time travel stories I have read at . I'm eagerly awaiting the next post, and wondering how this will continue.

Daniella

oh my 8 chapters in and am hooked. great fic

I'm enjoying your story, it's got a different kinda shape to it.

Gah - I keep going back to your profile, hoping to find a favourites list to peruse. Write more! The gods of fandom demand it!

I'm so happy this doesn't have a cliff-hanger! And that Obi-Wan hasn't yet given into the dark side . . . well, again.