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Rikku Ronso
2009-05-17 . chapter 24
Update update update
I love a good Aurikku, and this is a VERY good Aurikku
:) so cute
Kokomo7
2009-03-09 . chapter 24
all ive got to say is please please pretty please with a cherry on top please update!!
Raquel
2008-10-03 . chapter 24
=O Your not going to leave the story here are you? Please, itz getting so interesting :)
Ji-chan
2008-02-05 . chapter 24
This is a very plausible story! So sweet too! Please update soon.
Flaunt Your Individuality
2007-12-28 . chapter 24
No...No No No No no, you can't leave it there!
hand it off to another author atleast, but don't just leave it hanging! please finish the story!
Logan Sandmann
2007-11-14 . chapter 24
I'm no good with words... nor good at expressing myself... But I would like to say that I really liked the three fan fictions that you made...finished reading all three today and I can easily say that if you ever get your muse back for writing you stories you will have atleast one more person reading them...and if he can gather the courage sending a review for each one. All three are rather beutiful stories...even if they leave off at suspensful moments.
P.S. Wanted to comment on them all in one review but didn't know how so I sent it on the most recent chapter.
fuzzsquirrel
2007-07-26 . chapter 24
Aww, I love this story so much, it's just perfect! Too bad it's discontinued... *sigh*
OMFG I HATE THIS ACCOUNT
2007-05-07 . chapter 24
Man- I like this story! I've read all of this, and I like the way Auron calls Rikku 'princess', it's a nice touch. I didn't fully understand the scene at the thunderplains where they were cuddly and then screaming at eachother.

But I like angst.

I'll be keeping an eye on this thread.
DazzleGolden
2007-04-10 . chapter 24
You are absolutely AMAZING! I officially love you. Your story is so cute and exciting, and if Rikku and Auron's relationship were in the game; that's EXACTLY how I'd imagine them acting. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND YOU CANNOT GIVE UP-->I NEED TO HERE THE REST OR I'LL DIE OF... Fanfic Deprivation-itis. I'll be writing a story soon, hope you read it.
Maggie
2007-01-15 . chapter 8
The story is pretty okay. But - please don't takes this as a flame - you might want to proof-read, and everyone is a little out of character. Especially Auron. But the story is pretty good and cute and even a little funny. :D?
Mariah L. Black
2006-12-27 . chapter 5
Thank you for writing such a great Aurikku! This is far and away the best I've ever read!
pyro-witch2
2006-11-11 . chapter 24
OMG! NU! comeback! xD i need to read more! hahaha love the story its cute and fluffy >0
Tishannia
2006-11-05 . chapter 24
Oi. Cruelty. ;_; This is an amazing story, my favorite Aurikku. It's a shame it is discontinued (from what I can see anyway xD)
Anime-mistress585
2006-10-01 . chapter 24
that...that was an evil place to end. very evil. beyond evil, in fact. gah.

i love this story so much! i went hunting for aurikku and i stumbled on this beaut. thank god! the way you make your plot work so well with the game is absolutely amazing and the way their relationship is progressing is so realistic and wonderful and oh. that's really all i can say.

I will admit i was a bit disheartened when you changed the Seymour dilemna in the game to revolve entirely around Rikku, rather than maybe saying Seymour wanted them both, but the sunglasses and the hip-swaying scene in this chapter more than made up for it! Plus, it;s your story and it's amazing how you write this story to make such...oh...sense? Whether or not that's the word I wanted to use, this piece is just so incredibly brilliant, I can't wait until you update again.

I hope it's soon!
jrockerwendie
2006-09-28 . chapter 24
Hehe, this is one of my favorite aurikku stories, and I’m so sad that you never finished it, what happened to your writing? I was so looking forward to the battle with Brother as well as the confrontation with Seymour. Oh, Your story is so good! I read it all at once, so I only reviewed this once. It is so cute, I love the way you write the arguments between Auron and Rikku and the way the get back together again, and just the general silliness of Rikku which makes the story much more amusing, that and picturing Auron washing dishes among other things. I very much wish for you to continue, I haven’t read a aurikku this good in a long while, well, other than Gining’s stories ^^
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