 Novocain 2008-05-01 . chapter 1Wow. Just - wow. This: this is incredible. Your prose and style are absolutely magnificent, and I'm sure this qualifies as WRENCHING. Brilliant, and I'm only on the first chapter. |
 Jackie-Boy222 2008-04-17 . chapter 3Legendary.
Wow.
Thank you. |
 Lady Lark 2006-11-12 . chapter 3This was an interesting story I liked the disjointed nature of it and the insight that we got into Mirai Bulma. I think you are right, in the future timeline she is not as close to Vegita as she is in the regular timeline. I do think that there was something there between Bulma & Gohan as well. Those two acted like they were more than friends. Thank you for sharing! |
 koneko212 2006-05-01 . chapter 3Wow, where have you been? This piece has such a steady, quiet strengh. Every intention of every character made clear though the reader is only taken through Bulma's journey. You have used the mysticism of the human psyche to familiarize the surreal and make the familiar seam surreal. Only someone with talent could make a well known plot so captivating. You really have set the bar much higher for fanfiction. |
 tin797 2006-03-03 . chapter 3Beautifully written, imaginative use of words. Definitely not the pairings I like to read or even think about, but am thoroughly touched. |
 Jaganshi-Kyou 2005-05-02 . chapter 3Some people say I'm too indulgent; too praising; with my reviews, and as a result, they seem to lack sincerity, but I'm hard pressed to find other means to articulate the ...satisfaction... I got from reading this piece, which is, the same satisfaction I get from reading any good work of art. I believe your work, the aptly titled, Psalms of Lovers was beautifully written and well-rounded, and I was pleased to find the ending was in no way rushed, but like the rest of the story, sensually crafted; establishing a very ...tangible ambiance. It was a pleasant story; proof that, 'just because the ground's not uncharted, it doesn't make the resources tapped...' |
 Jaganshi-Kyou 2005-05-02 . chapter 1I've only read the first chapter so far, but it was so unbelievably good, that I felt I had to review. The writing is so poignant; I found myself, many times throughout this chapter, shuddering as i read some of the passages. The chapter was beatifully vivid. Its painstaking, lucidity was both captivating and intriuging.
It's fanfiction like this that inspires people to write; it's a shame you didn't get more reviews, it was a truly professional piece. |
 Jay 2004-11-19 . chapter 3 Very good written, though quite a few people have covered the possibility of a Mirai Gohan and Bulma couple already... |
 GohanGenius'85 2004-11-06 . chapter 1I never got to watch the Trunk's History thing and I have always wondered what happened in that timeline. I could actually see this being a possibility, an amusing possibility. Anyway, I thought the idea was great. |