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| A 2008-06-28 ch 1, anon. | abusefantastic |
| PrettyFanGirl 2008-01-25 ch 1,  | abuseWow. In a way, I'm glad that didn't really happen, and I mean no offense by that, but it was really sad, and I nearly cried during a few parts. That just makes it all the more touching though. |
| Ilene 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is a beautifully written story, it made me cry :-) I can't really explain why I like it so much, but it's one of my favourites. Thanks for writing it. |
| summersgirl2526 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseso sad |
| Ace Rabbit 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abusethat was really good. keep it up! |
| RonMione4eva 2006-02-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice but Sirius a drunk just doesn't work. |
| DDwelling 2005-12-16 ch 1, | abuseaw... (ignore the story alert) |
| Jayda Reed 2005-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey this was a great story. I cried all the way through it. I think you are a very good writer, and i would realy apprecate it if when you email me back you send a copy of the story with the email. Thank you. keep up the good writing. Jayda |
| Dybdahl 2005-03-03 ch 1, | abuseso sad, but still, lovely |
| jb 2005-02-21 ch 1, anon. | abuse;_; *cries like there is no tomorrow* Oh my... this was so sad. ;_; awesome ficy. *cries some more* Poor harry, poor Sirius... Wah! *cries* I'm okay... |
| Fate 2005-01-16 ch 1, anon. | abusewow... this is excellent, I love how it jumps around without being perfectly clear on any of its points. I've read other fics before where everything is just perfectly written and the point of the letter come across all angsty but not (if that makes any sense)... You've given sirius' character a rambling sort of confusion that one would find in a real letter, journal entry ect. where they're trying to work out their own feelings on a subject... *re-reads review* hm... that didn't make much sense did it... all well, suffice it so say this is a wonderful piece of writing! Well done! :D |
| Ginevra6 2004-10-06 ch 1, | abuseSailoranime, this is really good. I love the way you captured Sirius's angst; the depth of his feelings for Harry and his frustration. I'm glad you didn't totally villainise Harry - the point you brought across about his not being used to people caring that much about him is most apt. Great job! Evra |
| sunnysparkles 2004-10-06 ch 1, | abuse-Sniff- Aww, poor Sirius didn't think Harry loved him! Great letter! Well written. |
| Katie 2004-10-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseUh... wow... I'm going to think about this for a while, and then I'll write you another review. Just... |
| Star19 2004-10-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseVERY GOOD. Keep it up! I lke this story! |